Fly

Just a few more words slung together. Some are gonna love it and then, well you know....

 

Fly

 

A

Fly

Has no

Intelligence whatsoever

 

A

Fly is

Just a series

Of useless drives

 

Much

Like the insect

That took off in my car

 

Just

A stain on a

Rolled up newspaper on

The inside of an old wind screen

 

A

Fly

Has no

Intelligence whatsoever

Author's Note

Just an idea, that's all. Let's leave it at that eh' folks....

Reviews

[Terpsichore]

Very good. Just one question, if they're so dim, how come they're so hard to damn well swat. There was a big bugger annoying the hell out of me the other day. Took me ages to hunt him down and when I did, the wimp in me came out and I decided to shoo him out of the window instead of squashing him.

T

[Neville]

It's the survival instinct that kicks in, innit. Many thank you's are flying your way....N

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, those pesky flies, too bad they are damned quick despite being nothing more than instinct and senseless drive -- kind of some people, strong instinct to lie and steal -- not good for much else but awfully quick.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I like the format it drives the cadence, I also like the play between words.

[Neville]

Nice of you to say so Cherrie, much appreciated..... N

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

This is something which every person can understand and relate to. Flies are troublesome and irritating, aren't they? You can write better. Keep writing.

[Neville]

Why thank you so very, very much...........I most probably will