Nowhere to Hide

Nowhere to Hide

A Poem by Neville Pettitt

Nowhere to Hide

From

The

Cry

Of

Her

Hip

Bone

To

The

Fall

Of

Her

Thigh

There

Was

Nowhere

So

Vast

Yet

No

Place

To

Hide

.

 

 


 


© 2017 Neville Pettitt



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This was an interesting write. It can be taken in many ways, but I liked it. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

4 Months Ago

Cheers Ghost, much appreciated...
Hmmm....not sure about this one, Neville. The staccato lines put such emphasis on the words.....I wonder...has she fallen? Has she just realized her life is in disarray and she can not change it? There is an emotional impact here....interesting. Lydi**

Posted 8 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

4 Months Ago

Darn it Lydi, how could I have not thanked you before now for checking this? Many belated thank you'.. read more
Lydia

4 Months Ago

The time for a thank you never expires, my friend! :)
Neville Pettitt

4 Months Ago

...................xxxx

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Added on October 19, 2017
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Neville Pettitt
Neville Pettitt

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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