Problem

Problem

A Poem by Neville
"

Just a bit o tongue in cheek

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Problem

To tell you the truth

I am none too impressed

With the legend of your

Ancient hymen

 

However

 

That does not alter the fact

We are naked

In a cheap hotel room

With a problem

 

© 2018 Neville


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Neville
However, many a true word......................

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I'm not able to fathom what this problem might be, but I'm knocked over by your straightforward message & your unusual use of the word "hymen" (assuming this represents "virginity") -- something I've never pondered much in my life *sigh!* (((NUGS)))

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Margie, this was originally penned many, many moons ago. I dare not elaborate furt.. read more

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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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