Just a Bowl of Soup

Just a Bowl of Soup

A Poem by Neville
"

more of a word salad really....

"

Just a Bowl of Soup

 

I am not what

You think I am

Or who

I am a great big

Bowl of soup

Nothing more and

Nothing less

Tis true

 

Wow

 

I hear you say

Now there’s

A blooming thing  

Why what and how

My word you are

A nosey side salad

Spill the beans

Why dont’cha

 

Okay

 

Since tomato’s

Are

The in thing right now

And I’m not thick

Enough to be a stew

I just wanted to let

You know I love you

 

© 2018 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
from a clinical perspective, word salad may feature in several forms of mental illness...

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Endless soup and salad served at the Olive Garden daily and today at Nellive's bring your own spork.
Really a fun read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Well I'm just gonna drink to that my fine friend and true.. Hope all is well in your world Cherrie x
Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

Not to bad my way, about like always. :)
Neville

5 Years Ago

...........Super then... :)
i'll take this with double ranch and double tomato....thank you.

we can be so down, so mixed up...so out of it...but as Firefall sang...
and we can too...sing it to someone we care for..."just remember i love you, and it will be alright"----

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

you are an absolute delight sir. what a lovely sentiment and true... Neville
How can you communicate with someone who is using word salad? Their communication doesn't make sense, yet they understand what they mean. In this dialogue the most important thing I can see is the final two lines " I just wanted to let you know I love you". Word salad must cause a great deal of frustration. You always get me thinking Neville. How do ya deal with it?

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

It is often the source of much consternation, frustration and uncertainty.... with practice and some.. read more

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