Fine Young Disciples

Don't it make ya wanna spit...

Fine Young Disciples

 

When you

Have had

Your fill

Sweetheart

And he his

I do wonder

Who shall

Discard who

Yes I do still

Wonder

Every  

Now and then

Will it end

In tears

I imagine

That it might

Maybe even

Always will

That tho is

The risk

You take

Longevity or

Brief liaison

 

Talk about

Love

You dream

About it

But no it’s

Not for you

Fixated as

You are on

Fairy tales

And stardust

The time

Has come

To choose

My love

Choose now

Or risk

Loosing  

Each and every

One of us

Fine young

Disciples  

Author's Note

They never listen do they...

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

The young nowadays don't seem to be interested in fairy tales and happy everafters, nor wedding bells come to think of it. I guess there are a few young disciples with old fashioned ideas, the romantics and the poets of this world who still hanker after all that stuff. I am left thinking would I wanna go through all that again? Not in todays climate. You know, I imagined a Dad here talking to his beloved daughter. Just my mind wandering Neville. Nice lines.

Chris

[Neville]

So much truth our Chris and I thank you for it... N

[Lydia Shutter]

Why oh why do women go for the "bad boys"...the ones who will not stay when the going gets rough? It seems they won't listen and they go blindly. Such is life. We can only watch and try to be there to pick up the pieces when they crumble...as they surely will. Lydi**

[Neville]

yes.. it happens, and it happens all the time... cheers Lydi** so much appreciated and true x

[Mrudula Rani]

It didn't make me wanna spit... actually a wonderful advice for those who hesitate to give their heart to someone for the fear of getting it broken... unless you take a chance, you will never know what awaits for us in the form of love!

[Neville]

cheers M.. you are of course, spot on, life is full of choices & chances and risks, but if we dont take them, we go nowhere and do nothing with no one... N x

[Mrudula Rani]

Cheers my dear friend.