Ding Dong

Ding Dong

A Poem by Neville
"

summat different

"

Ding Dong

 

Take the ding

From my dong

                                      Take the how

From my long

                                     Take The tune

         From my song

 

Take the right  

From my wrong

What time we got left

 

Dunno but

 

We

Sure  

                    Ain’t got

 

L

o

n

g

 

 

  


© 2019 Neville


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Its absolutely ridiculous that here we are in 2018...wtf you mean its 2019?...and still guys aint safe to ding their dongs without some arsewipe micking it.
Uhm, im gonna efit the next bit so as not to come over all mysogin...misogynast....sexist n that.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

just come over and help me party... cheers Lorry



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50/50 makes 100- half half makes whole- balance, ying yang, taking a part in your being can strengthen Nd lengthen- time gained added- 🌹

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

the unity of opposites never ceases to amaze me.. we call it ken zen inchinyo ... bless you for that.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

5 Years Ago

Hmmmm- great minds think alike fools never differ- its all in the balance of being unbalanced that t.. read more
Neville

5 Years Ago

balance is the key, go ask any tight rope walker.. N :)
She must be very special, giving every thing: ding from dong, tune from your song, I hope this person appreciates the sacrifices and makes your time worthwhile!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

if I'm honest M.. I have no idea where this came from or fits.. I do know I appreciate your visit th.. read more
Mrudula Rani

5 Years Ago

Words of a true, gifted poet.
Neville

5 Years Ago

aw gawsh... here I go again :)
nicely exposed on the page, this blank is...
i wish from what time is left we could get rid of the wrong....
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Snap.. now wouldn't that be oh' so lovely jacob... cheers sir N :)
A different way of saying time is running out. Maybe a case of saying get on with it before it's too late. Don't let anyone take the tune from your song Neville. Do it your way.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

experimenting with time is futile.. gotta cram stuff in and make the most of it.. or summat like tha.. read more
Its absolutely ridiculous that here we are in 2018...wtf you mean its 2019?...and still guys aint safe to ding their dongs without some arsewipe micking it.
Uhm, im gonna efit the next bit so as not to come over all mysogin...misogynast....sexist n that.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

just come over and help me party... cheers Lorry
we got a dong long song ..............wong!!! :))))))))))) saw the title and that you wrote it ...i was hooked sir!
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

ahh my friend and true.. but when ya do, tis more than bloomin worth it, I can tell you, in fact.. j.. read more
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

back at ya sir!
Neville

5 Years Ago

....:)))) & true...

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