I'm Reaching Out, But I Feel Disconnected

I'm Reaching Out, But I Feel Disconnected

A Poem by Nicole Renee

Unless! Helpless! It is me at fault?
No, it’s not, but I have no solution
And I have nothing else that I can say.
My words have no song, yet they have emotion.
 They can listen. They can read. They can try to help.
But I can’t repair what’s been instilled, and stitch up
The hole that’s already been made. I’m not a motivator,
Or a speaker; they bring a piece of mind to everyone.
I sometimes wish I could be, or I’d have everybody
Turning on their ears to my native tongue,
Watching them create a new bridge and
Maybe try to repair a few of the broken ones that
Look like they have been left behind.
But as I said before. I’m not a motivator
And I can’t make people see my words.
But I can be an observer, a listener, a friend.
Happiness is what settles my nerves.
 
But I feel like the villain in the hero’s story,
Even if I’m tending the garden and growing the flowers.
I just care about your happiness,
And I care about what happens in the future.  
I just hope that the flower will talk to the bee
Before being stung by the stinger. 

© 2009 Nicole Renee


Author's Note

Nicole Renee
It's something that should of been talked and asked about, and now it's making somebody feel unloved and left out.

And I feel like the last part didn't make sense..but it makes sense to me.

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O MY GOODNESS! ! ! that is a very good piece of writing. i love oyur last part the most. it describes alot and i can see that from many points f views. GREAT job. keep it coming. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 7, 2009

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Nicole Renee
Nicole Renee

Anoka, MN



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I usually write poetry and short stories, yet I always come up with good ideas for novels. I did have a long biography on here,but when Charlie deleted everybody's work off of here on Friday the 13th,.. more..

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