Pride: I, Timothy the Great!

A poem that tells a soldier Timothy, whom rise to fame and became corrupted by the luxury he now posses.

I

I, Timothy, the greatest worrier of the world! 

Slayer of the 1000! Hero of the Joastinians! 

I am the God of War!

II

Hurry my slaves! For I shall dress my self to battle against those rats!

I will swing my Godly power with my holy sword!

I, will be slayer of the 2000! 

Hereby rats! I will slay you all, 2000 more!''

III

Makarth, A general of the Russians has challenged me!

He challenged a God!

Very well! I shall crush him like a rat he is!

For I will declare myself the victor before this duel starts!

IV

Warriors of the Joastine! Praise your God! Your Mighty God!

For I shall swing my sword to this rat-headed beast!

Russians! If I win, your country will be the least!

If you win, head to east! For I will never fall but to feast!

V

The rat swings his sword poorly! Ha!

He defended badly! Haha!

With a kick of his body, he falls! Hahaha!

I strip him with his armor down to his bare body and showed it to his soldiers!

VI

The rats retreats! Victory I smelled to feast!

Makarth I caged him as pet, for I win!.

''Your pride is strong'' Makarth had said.

And he swooped down from the cage and get my sword!

This is the end of me, my pride did betray Timo-. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[EMMIE]

Definitely something different then what I usually read. This is very well written and interesting. Great job!