Racing

Racing

A Poem by Nipplegrinder

I'll never outrace the wind
I'll never bleed as a soldier or warrior
I'll never know the spoils of either
I've known fighting, revenge, fear
I've known storms, death, despair
I've known emptiness and
fulfillment
Eagerness and crestfallen defeat
Even hunger
Does not describe
How very much I love thee

© 2017 Nipplegrinder



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this is interesting and has me think about the way it has been written to no end. I like the sentiment behind it. Lucky muse. Interesting to say 'I'll never bleed as a soldier or warrior' but then say 'I've known fighting'

Your lines are like a reverse of love that gives the love of the muse the potency X

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

1 Month Ago

I'm glad you see all this in this piece. However, that particular line was actually a personal one t.. read more
KWP

1 Month Ago

Yes, I figured as much - which is why it makes it a little more cryptic X



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this is interesting and has me think about the way it has been written to no end. I like the sentiment behind it. Lucky muse. Interesting to say 'I'll never bleed as a soldier or warrior' but then say 'I've known fighting'

Your lines are like a reverse of love that gives the love of the muse the potency X

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

1 Month Ago

I'm glad you see all this in this piece. However, that particular line was actually a personal one t.. read more
KWP

1 Month Ago

Yes, I figured as much - which is why it makes it a little more cryptic X

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Nipplegrinder
Nipplegrinder

St. Louis , MO



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I would love any type of feedback on my writing. I'm a Gentleman who loves to write about different kinds of things. My content often involves BDSM, so my blog is NSFW, not suited for minors, and hop.. more..

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