She Only Owns The Sea

She Only Owns The Sea

A Poem by Nipplegrinder

To say she only owns the sea
Says but she only owns that part of me
To say she commands the winds
Says but she only owns that part of me
To say she sets the stars
Casts the moon
Inspires song
And emboldens toil
Says she owns my all

© 2017 Nipplegrinder



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I don't have a comment about the textual meaning of this poem. Most poetry means kinda whatever you think it means and isn't relevant to all readers, for some it's spot on for others it's elevator music.

I really like the sounds you construct in this poem, the rhyme - where it rhymes - is simple no frills end rhyme, nothing bizarre, forced or experimental. Workaday rhyme. The really pretty part of this poem is the way you use the vowels, repeating the sounds so they resonate in a musical fashion. That's good work. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

1 Day Ago

Wow. Thank you for your kind words. I truly appreciate it.


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This is a great illumination on the various parts of ourselves which we may choose to share.. but to know that you have the "all" of another.. I don't think there can be any higher love than that.. it's not ownership; it's belonging and true felt intimacy. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Day Ago


Nipplegrinder

1 Day Ago

Well, I am a Dom, but I do have a romantic streak. Thanks for the kind words, dear.
Alexa Apothic Red

1 Day Ago

Nothing wrong with that at all. Alas, I am but a helpless/hopeless romantic *insatiable*
Your poem reads with lyrical style & at the same time it feels like a puzzle as I try to dice up the domains you describe. Love the way you relate the various natural phenomenon to differing levels of being immersed in the love feelings! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Day Ago


Nipplegrinder

1 Day Ago

I'm so pleased you like this, Margie.
Hugs.
I don't have a comment about the textual meaning of this poem. Most poetry means kinda whatever you think it means and isn't relevant to all readers, for some it's spot on for others it's elevator music.

I really like the sounds you construct in this poem, the rhyme - where it rhymes - is simple no frills end rhyme, nothing bizarre, forced or experimental. Workaday rhyme. The really pretty part of this poem is the way you use the vowels, repeating the sounds so they resonate in a musical fashion. That's good work. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

1 Day Ago

Wow. Thank you for your kind words. I truly appreciate it.
Divine little story.
This could only be told by someone with a romantic heart

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

1 Month Ago

Thanks, KC. I'm so pleased you like it.
EXQUISITE LOVE POEM.. I ENVY YOUR LOVE AND SUPREME DEVOTION

Posted 2 Months Ago


Nipplegrinder

2 Months Ago

Thank you! I'm pleased you found beauty here.

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Added on December 15, 2017
Last Updated on December 15, 2017
Tags: love, devotion, commitment


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