..._...

holding

releasing

holding

releasing

releasing and holding

 

inside

is

out

and

everywhere

 

holding

releasing

holding

releasing

releasing and holding

 

seeing

nothing

feeling

nothing

being

nothing

everywhere

 

holding

releasing

holding

releasing

releasing and holding

 

an

intake

an

outtake

outside and in

 

nothing

everything

everywhere

nowhere

here

 

i

am

am

i

here

 

holding

releasing

holding

releasing

releasing and holding

 

seeing

blinking

staring

away

 

gone

 

away

 

gone...

 

seeing

being

nothing

 

pain

 

nothing

 

joy

 

nothing

 

and holding and releasing

Reviews

[Seriana]

I totally agree with the other two reviews. I felt like I was holding my breath, holding the tension inside, but not wanting to release because I can't. This is awesome, and the title....how appropriate. :)

[Laura E. Aranda]

Breath. That is what I think of as I read your nothing poem.......It was interesting. Cheers to you.

Lea

[closed account]

I kind of get the feeling that you are in a numb state of mind, it's kind of hard to put it together but that was the emotion that I got out of it!