I gave you my heart

I gave you my heart

A Story by Ov3R_sKiLl3D
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Its a poem i wrote...........

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I gave you my heart,

Wishing that we would never part…

I will hold you in my soul,

Always a part of you to make me whole…

 

Having you in my life…

Is a beautiful feeling …

You make me feel

So special

One day long ago there was no you,

There was only me.

 

It was so hard to live without you,

It was so hard to stop thinking about you……

It was like I lost my life,

I couldn’t eat or sleep without you,Then

I thought that……Love is not a feeling,

It’s a choice you can’t feel it you have to choose it….


© 2015 Ov3R_sKiLl3D



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Ov3R_sKiLl3D
I hope u enjoy.... :)

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that is very beautiful and the love you are showing is amazing. well done :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


LOVE is our lot. We claim we do not love and yet we cannot live without.

Posted 2 Years Ago


"you can't feel it, you have to choose it". This is well said. Love is everywhere and comes in many forms. It's definitely a choice to see it or not see it in this world.

Posted 2 Years Ago


It's amazing to read sentiments on love from such a young lad. That's one lucky girl. The emotions are quite evident. Well done!

One little suggestion, and I hope you would take it fine. Some of your poems need a little proofreading.

I thought that……Love is not a felling, --- I think you meant "feeling".

But then, these are little errors and once you correct them, they will contribute to your improvement as a poet/writer.

Kudos!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

Ohh yeah its an typo m gonna fix that .... :)
Lavender Soya

2 Years Ago

Hahaha I see. :-) All right. That'd be nice!
Another lovely write!
Keep it up!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very good poem :-) ... thank you for sharing

Posted 2 Years Ago


yes true..... it is a choice which you are never able to choose..... good job it's a wonderful poem

Posted 2 Years Ago


Loved It! It is indeed a choice! The words went smoothly with the flow of the poem and penned excellently. Thanks for sharing! ☺

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow. This was great. It reminded me of where I was in my life 5 years ago. He was here and then gone and I felt like my heart was literally gone out of my chest. Then I decided not to choose love so I wouldn't have to feel anything. But that doesn't last very long for someone like me.. Lol
Great piece! I loved it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Cool Girl

2 Years Ago

I totally agree, Ashley!
Yes, we do not get to choose the one our heart seems to pick out for us to love...although some relationships might end better if we used our brains while looking for a partner. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

yeah u r right....
thanks for the review :)

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