My Dream

My life is like a dream
Even if it just makes me want to scream.
When I do wake,
I still feel like I'm in a lake.

Seeing you is a dream to me,
But I can't move because you have my key.
This dream is killing
Almost like someone tilling.

In my dream I feel nothing,
But I still have some loving.
I have never felt this way,
But you always make me pay.

I want you here,
Even if I don't even know you're near.
It was the hardest thing to say good-bye,
But I knew I shouldn't cry.

I gave you all I need,
I was like a bead
On a broken ugly necklace lying on the ground.

You never understood my pain,
Since you had nothing to gain.

My tears have trickled down my face,
But being around you always made my heart race.
I stood out in the rain,
Even though my heart was only a vein.

This dream has showed me much,
As close to life like a gentle touch.
I never thought this dream would just be a haunt,
But you just made me quite gaunt.

My body is almost in the dream
And I can feel your eyes have a beam.
You'll never understand what I felt
Or even what I had dealt.

This dream is killing me inside out
So maybe I should fine a different route.
In the dream I can't see a thing,
Except for your ring.

All I wanted in the dream was you to care,
But you were so caught up in your "fake love" that you didn't dare.
I give up on you
You can do whatever you want to do.

I hope I wake from this dream soon
That way I can look up at the full-moon.
You'll never get to see it
Even if you have your first-aid kit.

                               Adrianna Fletcher

Reviews

[Michael W. Farrelly]

At one point there's a sense of rejection, abondonment, then the humour comes out into the rythm. Good job.

[Sean Allen]

Reminded me of Fezzik, Inigo and Vizzini.

[Crowley]

lol...this is quite the undertaking. It played along with a sing song style that was lighthearted and fun. And the ending was funny and had a little punch that I really liked. Nice job sweets.