Tell me

Rap it please, for that's what it was written for. :)

Tell me

One more time

Tell me

That you’re leavin’

‘Cos my heart just can’t accept this

It needs help believin’

That after all this time

All the love that we shared

You’d just walk away

As if you were scared

Of commitment

You deny it

But I know you’re afraid

 to be dependent

on other people

Yeah you know what I’m sayin

You built walls around your heart

You’re tearing me apart

But you won’t take ‘em down

You’ll leave me to drown

In the misery

You refuse to express

But you won’t confess

Any feeling you may possess

I’ve hit your barrier

And it keeps getting scarier

How you zip up your lip

Won’t say a word

Like somebody clipped it

Your face is a blank wall

So I think you’ve no feelings at all

While you’re ready to scrawl

A suicide note

With all the words your heart

is dying to cry out

Emotions like water

flowing out of a spout

But you won’t say 'em aloud

You’re too proud

So you keep fightin’

Keep bitin’ your tongue

So you tell me it’s over

Our song’s been sung

It’s our relationship’s fault!

Sure it is, hon.

You’re dying inside

But you’d never say why

You won’t cry

And I’m not ready

To say goodbye

But I’ll step back

Hurt and stung

The final bell has rung

Why can’t you see

The only one for you is me

You won’t hear my desperate plea

On bended knee

Baby don’t flee!

Open up and be free

Just please…

Don’t leave me.

Author's Note

WC decided to be an idiot and crash right when I finished the first version of "Tell Me", and I couldn't remember a lot of the orginal (which, in my opinion, was the best peice of writing I've EVER written. Like... as good as Eminem's rap in Love the Way You Lie. I was sooooo proud.) so THIS one here is not NEARLY as good and is the mere skeleton of the peice before it, which sorta kinda pisses me off, but I hope you enjoy it anyway. It is a rap, so try your best to find the beat and rap it! ;-)

BTW I don't really like the title, suggestions are welcome. :D Thanks for reading, and please review.

Reviews

[Glenn McCrary�]

This is freaking amazing :) I loved it. :)

[Kitten]

I'm sure the original was brilliant, Pet.

This rap is very interesting, wonder what inspired it.

[_thesovo]

I tried to rap this. But sadly, Sovo isn't the rappin' type. Yo.
xD I love this though. :D Boss. I deserve a raise for this.

I'm sorry. I shall hit WC for you. *hits*

Wuffles you. *putts this with a golf club into my fav's*