Mirror

PLEASE read this carefully there's a very deep meaning hidden in those poem.

Mirror,Mirror,on the wall
Why is that me
On your wall

Why isn't it somebody
Beautiful like every fairytales
Why isn't it somebody
Flawless like the magazine

People describe me as flawless
The mirror show me the opposite-
Imperfection,Ugliness
Trying to change but
The mirror always show the same-
Imperfection,Ugliness

People may not see it
But looking at the mirror
All I see is imperfection
All I see is ugliness

Things that I can't hide
Things that the mirror lies

Your reflection is not based off of a mirror or someone else opinion!Your reflection is BEAUTIFUL you just need the right eye,the right person,the right...mirror to see it!

Author's Note

PLEASE read the last bit carefully!!!

Reviews

[Brooklyn]

Everybody is beautiful and flawless in their own way. You took that message and put here where any one can understand that people who call you ugly and imperfect are people who are blind and the wrong mirror.

[SkyVy]

My dear friend Brooklyn, one of the reason I wrote this poem was so YOU could understand that you're beautiful it's your eye it's your mirror that's making you think otherwise.

[APOORVA]

Why isn't it somebody
Beautiful like every fairytales
Why isn't it somebody
Flawless like the magazine
WOW, A GOOD QUESTION TO SELF AND TO EVERYONE.

People describe me as flawless
The mirror show me the opposite-
Imperfection,Ugliness
Trying to change but
The mirror always show the same-
Imperfection,Ugliness
THE MIRROR ACTUALLY SHOWS THE REALITY. EXTREMELY COMMENDABLE.

People may not see it
But looking at the mirror
All I see is imperfection
All I see is ugliness
YOU NAILED YOUR PIECE HERE, WELL DONE MATE IN THESE LINES BECAUSE ITS THE CORE OF ALL

[SkyVy]

Thank you for your review, I was really trying to put what I usually think when looking at my self in the mirror.The stanza you pointed out was one of the key point I was trying to get out there so thank you for liking it.

[Jes' Pi]

Beautiful poem..mirror..:)
100/100

[SkyVy]

Thank you for liking it!

[Manasa.L]

SkyVy you stole my heart. This poem actually depicts my mind when I see the mirror. Thank you for those last lines - "Your reflection is not based off of a mirror or someone else opinion!Your reflection is BEAUTIFUL you just need the right eye,the right person,the right...mirror to see it! ".
You really made my day. Thank you for sharing these wonderful lines.

[SkyVy]

I'm so glad this spoke to you, I am also in the same situation.Im so glad this made your day, your comment made my day so thank you.