Our Sleep Just After

Falling..........................................................................

Our Sleep Just After

Bliss gathered from shadows

when the moon is so bright

when the heart whispers gently

for your softness each night.

Lay with me forever

in this tranquil cool peace

as our efforts expended

are such a perfect release.

 

26/08/17

Reviews

[wordman]

sweet,sweet love,a sweet,beautiful soul to share your bed,your inner most feelings,,lovely

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Ron. Written for someone special.

[emmajoy]

' Bliss gathered from shadows ' Honey-sweet words, fine meter, magic moments and more behind closed doors.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So pleased you enjoyed this one Emma, many thanks.

[Lorry]

Perfect. You capture the unspoken moments so well John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thank your Lorry

[Einstein Noodle]

so inspiring Sir John! seems romantic poetry is having a run at the cafe ...into me library this one goes ..it is so ...well.... warm, gracious, gentle soft .. precious
E.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am so, so humbled EN many thanks.

[DIVYA]

A softly romantic poem, in sweet rhyme enjoyed equally as much as your bold, sensual, soul stripping masterpieces. 🌟

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Divya, you are very supportive and kind. Thank you.