The Vow

The Vow

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

A wonderful county, wonderful love.


The Vow

Come sweet upon this bed,

the place where I lay

for you,

for your happiness

and for your very joy.

Here I will but serve,

honour you with

every drop of sweat

until you are sated

and filled

and until you sigh

the sweetest sigh

that stirs the jealousy

of angels.



© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen

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the sweet sigh,the low moan,makes it worth all the effort

Posted 1 Year Ago

John Alexander McFadyen

1 Year Ago

Indeed it does and many thank yous Ron.
Now this my friend - this is steamy stuff. Quite apt for a chilly Saturday night though. Love the accent!

Posted 1 Year Ago

John Alexander McFadyen

1 Year Ago

Thank you Tony you are indeed inspiration.

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Added on September 16, 2017
Last Updated on September 18, 2017


John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom

Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..


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