Murmurations

Murmurations

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

A wish, a breath, a prayer.

"

Murmurations

Friends can be lovers

and lovers indeed be friends,

and we should be too.


23/09/17


© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen



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love the title ..so fitting for your poem ..and vice versa .. its like..from the book of murmurations .. let it rustle through my heart tonight as i drift off ;) ...forgive her for she knew not what she doeth :)))))
forgive me..i'm damned if i doeth or don'teth
E.
ps great little poem ..really does bless me

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much 'E' I am most grateful.
A philosophy that is easy to imagine, but all the more difficult to actually live out. Perhaps that makes it even more important, worth striving for. I enjoyed this, thank you for sharing!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Weeks Ago

Indeed difficult. Many thanks OAM
I suppose friends can be lovers, but it is a difficult situation to handle if one of the friends finds another. Short and to the point....perhaps it will work for you. Lydi**

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Weeks Ago

Perhaps just words on vellum for a poet to create illusion. Thank you Lydi.
i have several ex-girlfriends who are still very good friends...went to some of their weddings...relate to this.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Weeks Ago

Indeed so Jacob. Too often acrimony rules. Many thanks
friendship is something we all need to keep ourselves alteast somewhat sane. they fill the gaps and holes in our hearts if true towards us with their intentions. friends can help us grow and become the people we aim to be
not every friendship is meant to romantic or sensual. it can just be two people who care deeply for each other !!!
this was sweet and well written

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Weeks Ago

I agree and thank you Pia.

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools. I have.. more..

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