Murmurations

A wish, a breath, a prayer.

Murmurations

Friends can be lovers

and lovers indeed be friends,

and we should be too.

23/09/17

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

love the title ..so fitting for your poem ..and vice versa .. its like..from the book of murmurations .. let it rustle through my heart tonight as i drift off ;) ...forgive her for she knew not what she doeth :)))))
forgive me..i'm damned if i doeth or don'teth
E.
ps great little poem ..really does bless me

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much 'E' I am most grateful.

[OneAmongstMany]

A philosophy that is easy to imagine, but all the more difficult to actually live out. Perhaps that makes it even more important, worth striving for. I enjoyed this, thank you for sharing!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed difficult. Many thanks OAM

[Lydia Shutter]

I suppose friends can be lovers, but it is a difficult situation to handle if one of the friends finds another. Short and to the point....perhaps it will work for you. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Perhaps just words on vellum for a poet to create illusion. Thank you Lydi.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have several ex-girlfriends who are still very good friends...went to some of their weddings...relate to this.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed so Jacob. Too often acrimony rules. Many thanks

[pia]

friendship is something we all need to keep ourselves alteast somewhat sane. they fill the gaps and holes in our hearts if true towards us with their intentions. friends can help us grow and become the people we aim to be
not every friendship is meant to romantic or sensual. it can just be two people who care deeply for each other !!!
this was sweet and well written

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I agree and thank you Pia.