If

Should  I kiss your lips
Just the corner of your mouth
Where the honey drips - 
I wonder if  
I would speak your language

Your eyes soft and warm 
Just a tiny glint of devilishness
If I could kiss your eyelids
Softly so softly 
Could I see what you see 

Should I be able to nibble
Your earlobes partially covered
By your beautiful hair
Would I hear what you hear
With heartbeats

I wonder if I could
Kiss you, taste your soul
See myself through your eyes
Hear my heartbeats with yours
If I could would I like the me you see

Author's Note

Quick quack of a write -

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Oh you got it bad lol But what is better than that ?

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

Thank you Tate well I've had it bad at the moment I don't LOL

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing description of the human touch. The what if's leave us wishing we were more brave in love. The questions and mystery of love leave us wishing we had did more. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

Thank you for raising my friend

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

Reading not raising lol

[emmajoy]

Oooh delicious! Seems you have a luscious feast before you .. and i have to say, that's just how your poem reads - it certainly flows like that honey.

The entire write is wonderful but that first stanza is yummy, ''Should I kiss your lips ~Just the corner of your mouth ~ Where the honey drips - I wonder if I would speak your language'..

The way you finish is poetically explicit - perfect. Brava!

[AK]

Amazing write, Chloe! It is so well described and filled with imagery! Great write!

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

If, If? I think you have already and that's how you can write like this!

You swim the poem of life Chloe, well done!

A pure joy to read this delicate and sensual piece. Not overdone, just divine, and in between the lines so many clues. Nice to see some rhyme soul, and rhytm. All with deeper meanings.

[Muse]

nothing quaky about this. It's the theme of many love poems..a thirst...and a desire to be a part of another soul. You write the brighter side of this thirst...my spin on it is like cannibalism...lol...if I can't consume...then I'll purge. Lovely...seductive penning.

Muse

[Michael X]

The ending draws the heart to reflect, the romantic psychology of a dream love casting the sunset over a lover's eyes, this is so classic and compelling. I could feel my thoughts drawn to the realm of the feeling, to wonder, to lust, to hurt and fade away, such are moments of love.

[paul]

everything is if

[Suze]

No, not a quick quack - I really like this. It expresses the wonderment of love to me and the way you want to really know a person when you are in love with them. Also, the wondering about how they see you and if you would like it. Great!