If

If

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

Should  I kiss your lips
Just the corner of your mouth
Where the honey drips - 
I wonder if  
I would speak your language

Your eyes soft and warm 
Just a tiny glint of devilishness
If I could kiss your eyelids
Softly so softly 
Could I see what you see 

Should I be able to nibble
Your earlobes partially covered
By your beautiful hair
Would I hear what you hear
With heartbeats

I wonder if I could
Kiss you, taste your soul
See myself through your eyes
Hear my heartbeats with yours
If I could would I like the me you see












© 2011 Chloe..Across the Universe



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Chloe..Across the Universe
Quick quack of a write -

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Oh you got it bad lol But what is better than that ?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chloe..Across the Universe

4 Years Ago

Thank you Tate well I've had it bad at the moment I don't LOL
Amazing description of the human touch. The what if's leave us wishing we were more brave in love. The questions and mystery of love leave us wishing we had did more. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Chloe..Across the Universe

4 Years Ago

Thank you for raising my friend
Chloe..Across the Universe

4 Years Ago

Reading not raising lol
Oooh delicious! Seems you have a luscious feast before you .. and i have to say, that's just how your poem reads - it certainly flows like that honey.

The entire write is wonderful but that first stanza is yummy, ''Should I kiss your lips ~Just the corner of your mouth ~ Where the honey drips - I wonder if I would speak your language'..

The way you finish is poetically explicit - perfect. Brava!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Amazing write, Chloe! It is so well described and filled with imagery! Great write!

Posted 5 Years Ago



If, If? I think you have already and that's how you can write like this!

You swim the poem of life Chloe, well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


A pure joy to read this delicate and sensual piece. Not overdone, just divine, and in between the lines so many clues. Nice to see some rhyme soul, and rhytm. All with deeper meanings.

Posted 5 Years Ago


nothing quaky about this. It's the theme of many love poems..a thirst...and a desire to be a part of another soul. You write the brighter side of this thirst...my spin on it is like cannibalism...lol...if I can't consume...then I'll purge. Lovely...seductive penning.

Muse

Posted 5 Years Ago


The ending draws the heart to reflect, the romantic psychology of a dream love casting the sunset over a lover's eyes, this is so classic and compelling. I could feel my thoughts drawn to the realm of the feeling, to wonder, to lust, to hurt and fade away, such are moments of love.


Posted 5 Years Ago


everything is if

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No, not a quick quack - I really like this. It expresses the wonderment of love to me and the way you want to really know a person when you are in love with them. Also, the wondering about how they see you and if you would like it. Great!

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..

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