If

If

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

Should  I kiss your lips
Just the corner of your mouth
Where the honey drips - 
I wonder if  
I would speak your language

Your eyes soft and warm 
Just a tiny glint of devilishness
If I could kiss your eyelids
Softly so softly 
Could I see what you see 

Should I be able to nibble
Your earlobes partially covered
By your beautiful hair
Would I hear what you hear
With heartbeats

I wonder if I could
Kiss you, taste your soul
See myself through your eyes
Hear my heartbeats with yours
If I could would I like the me you see











© 2011 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
Quick quack of a write -

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Chloe Sometimes the things I think are no good of my own turn out to be the best I ever did same is true of you

Posted 12 Years Ago


Soft, gentle kisses of romance...lips/ eyelids/ earlobes...tasting the soul, thus really seeing inside.... only your reflection in his eyes...Last two lines are marvelous. Lovely work...

Posted 12 Years Ago


You have well glorified the Kiss, transforming into a process. I like it

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think you have a tasteful talent for the wild whisper

Posted 12 Years Ago


My favorite part.......I wonder if I could
Kiss you, taste your soul
See myself through your eyes
Hear my heartbeats with yours
If I could would I like the me you see

Beautiful and full of love!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Desires and choices. You have distilled the deepest of human emotions and laid them threadbare. These are beautiful words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Quite the intimate piece for a quick write. Lovely to read for certain!

I like this quite a bit:
"Should I kiss your lips
Just the corner of your mouth
Where the honey drips - "

Posted 12 Years Ago


I would call it a wondrous write

Posted 13 Years Ago


"If" I were a critic and thankfully I'm not, I'll just tell you
how I feel. This was and is such a emotive piece with all
the right imagery to make it perfect. There was a band in
the late 60s early 70s called (Bread) They had a song called "If"
and I loved that song... Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


very sensuous and sweet Chloe. nice piece

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..

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