A special Cuban night

A special Cuban night

A Poem by Paul

On a special Cuban night,
The look in your eyes,
Your smile so bright
Kisses from your lips last through the whole night.

The feelings we share,
With strong love in our hearts,
There is no more guessing,
I knew it right from the start.

The smile you bring,
The laughter we share,
Only brings us closer,
No one else could ever compare.

A gift we both received,
On that special Cuban night,
It's more wonderful than ever,
I can see it clearly now, our love reminds me every night.

© 2017 Paul



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The feelings we share,
With strong love in our hearts,
There is no more guessing,
I knew it right from the start.
RELATABLE LINES.


The smile you bring,
The laughter we share,
Only brings us closer,
No one else could ever compare.
THERE IS ALWAYS SOME ONE WHO BRINGS SMILE TO OUR FACE, RARE AND LOVED ONE.


A gift we both received,
On that special Cuban night,
It's more wonderful than ever,
I can see it clearly now, our love reminds me every night.

LOVE IN CUBAN NIGHT...WOW!
SUCH AN IMPRESSIVE WRITE

Posted 7 Months Ago


Paul

7 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words. As well as the critique. I appreciate that. I'm glad you enjoyed this.. read more
This experience is enviable, to say the least. But I'd sure like to hear you take that within from deep inside your chest and compare it to what it's never been compared to before... where the stars talk to you and your seat has to be nailed to the floor, where little children are throwing petals down from the rafters and wnen you take your love in your arms you find yourselves in a whole new space! Just saying :):):) I.I.

Posted 7 Months Ago



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Added on March 14, 2017
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Tags: Vacation, Love, kiss, paradise

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Paul
Paul

Ontario , Canada



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Writing has been a passion of mine, ever since I started taking it seriously about two years ago. My poetry is a constant work in progress, in which I strive to succeed more so every day. Your cons.. more..

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