Until we meet again

Until we meet again

A Poem by Paul

Goodbye my sweet love,
Until we meet again,
If I should be granted this one wish,
Know that my love still lies deep within,
It was a world of happiness, we both sought,
A doubtless love, not yet restrained,
This burden presented itself,
While fearful of your silence,
Unbeknownst to me,
Competing for your heart,
Carefully I would always tread,
Love poetry would be written,
Only to blind eyes it was read,
So goodbye my sweet love,
Until we meet again,
My heart will always remain open,
For it be only well wishes I send.


© 2017 Paul



Author's Note

Paul
Not a typical rhyming poem from me this time. Although this is a little sad, I hope you still enjoy.

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I did enjoy
I feel unrhyming poetry the best
I write both rhyming and unrhyming
Enjoyed

Posted 4 Months Ago


Paul

4 Months Ago

Thank you, for your kind words.
this reminds me of long distance relationships and the pain that goes with it, it's also very beautiful and so promising

Posted 4 Months Ago


Paul

4 Months Ago

Thank you, once again. This was the thought going into writing this poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
So beautiful
i felt each word
so stunning

Posted 5 Months Ago


Paul

5 Months Ago

Thanks for your kind review. I appreciate your visit.
WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.
Only to blind eyes it was read..... just like Cassandra. So poignant, but it will live forever!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your review. I appreciate the visit.

Paul
Beautiful. I tend to write free verse or free form which doesn't necessarily have to have a rhyme scheme.
"My heart will always remain open,
For it be only well wishes I send. "
This is true for me. I will always leave a place open for that love who left me, and I can only send my wish for his eyes to return.


Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for your kind words.

Paul
LeeAnne Peytonn

6 Months Ago

You're welcome :)
My favorite line:
"So goodbye my sweet love,
Until we meet again,"
It's hard knowing we will say goodbye to everyone and everything we know one day. It's possibly the most difficult thing to say goodbye forever. Great job with this piece!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words. It was an emotional piece to write. I'm glad you enjoyed this.. read more
Nice flow of thoughts and no goodbye is a good one.
"So goodbye my sweet love,
Until we meet again, "
I like the lines above. My Grandfather told me often. Never say goodbye. Say-Until I meet you again my friend. Thank you Paul for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate the visit!
Until we meet again is so muc.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

You are right and you are welcome.
This was hard to read for me due to the delicate, powerful words you used. It was hard because it was sad and it made me cry. It's just that, its sad to know but it's hard to say goodbye forever, it's really hard... You've created a beautiful... emotional piece that for sure will make the readers cry as it's so delicate and really emotional... Outstanding job! Keep it up!
It's really hard to find quality work these days.... but you've done it!
Keep it up

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

Thank you, once again!

Paul
Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

No problem :)
it`s hard to say good bye,so we leave the door open i guess,lovely write my friend

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

As always, thank you for your kind words! I appreciate your review.
 wordman

6 Months Ago

always a pleasure to return a favor
Gorgeous, gorgeous sentiment. Honest and heartfelt. The title says it all "Until We Meet Again"
Lovely :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate the visit!
Tina H.W.

6 Months Ago

A pleasure :)

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Added on March 23, 2017
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Tags: Loss, breakup, heartfelt, missing

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Ontario , Canada



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