Haiku

A special love.

your heartsong shimmer
graces my wandering night
light waters blue moon

Reviews

[lynn]

Gorgeous!

[April Child]

Sweet and tender haiku. Love how such few words can be so evocative.

[The Cobra Lounge]

The font...the colours..it all adds to the poem instead of taking away from it. I've seen some writers go over board with font play..."I" included. Nice work!

Muse

[angelink]

So beautiful :) I love the imagery that I get from this. I see a person sitting by a lake watching the moon light dance on the water and thinking of someone they are in love with :)

[MOON]

Beautifully deep!

[Mockingbird]

i picture the blue moon guiding you as a muse and inspires poetry in you. the 'light waters blue moon' come together to illuminate your artistic soul. very profound piece.

[OT]

a great haiku! the play on colours and light creates great imagery - you've packed a lot into these three short lines - "light waters blue moon" is my favourite! nice!

[Robin]

excellent images cast upon my mindscape

[Desert Dreamer]

An beautiful image with meaning...I see a moon reflected on the water, the way we reflect each other in a relationship, I see a heart shimmering in the night on the water of the soul.

[Dani]

I'm usually not a fan of haiku poetry, but I like this quite a bit. Especially that last line, "light waters blue moon." Really, really great.