Last Piece of Home

Written after saying the most difficult farewell to my last high school friend.

Our final goodbye -

I should have held you longer...

Trains wait for no one.

Author's Note

Sorry for the short poem today guys, but I wrote this as a haiku instead of free verse. I still hope you enjoy it, thanks for stopping by, and have a great day!
<3 Elisa

Reviews

[thewholesoul]

beautiful haiku, very much enjoyed and i think everyone can relate to this one

[Elisa]

Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

[Chase]

The length of a piece does not determine the strength of validity. Haiku's can be very powerful and you have managed to get a strong image and many emotions across with this one. Well done.

[Elisa]

Thanks so much :)

[Chase]

You're very welcome Elisa :)

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

No need for more words, because even in this brevity were you able to convey the lamenting goodbye jolted too soon by trains that "wait for no one." I am sorry you had to part with a friend. It is always very difficult.

[Elisa]

Thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed the poem!

[Horizons]

Oh Elisa, I`ve been always right. You are really hot.. aren't you, my dear? Oh, of course, you are. Don`t be shy. lol

You`ve opened your blueberry heart to this poetry. Your lime emotions are well captured to your words as well... that I always love `bout you. It`s, of course, very hard saying goodbye to those who`re very close to our hearts so, I do deeply understand the feeling as well as the worth of this short poetry.

Elisa, your "Haiku" is one of my favorites .. as same as, to be honest, you are one of my favorites as well. Keep writing... hey, i`m sure, one day, you`d be walking over the sky as a professional queen of literature. Don`t give up. Always keep smiling & posting with love!

[Elisa]

Awww thank you so much for being so kind to me and faithful to my work!