Rebirth

Composed in 'Haiku' style format!

Rebirth

 

 

I rest my soul down

Asleep to unconsciousness

Awaiting rebirth

 

@Phillozofee 2017

Author's Note

Haiku poems consist of 3 lines. The first and last lines of a Haiku have 5 syllables and the middle line has 7 syllables. The lines rarely rhyme. Because Haikus are such short poems, they are usually written about things that are recognizable to the reader.

Reviews

[Kesha]

This Is such a beautiful haiku! I've always struggled with haikus, as I prefer to write longer pieces, I was never able to express myself properly in a haiku, but but you did wonderfully!

[. serah .]

~ i'm reading this piece through the prism of my own experiences... and it reminds me of how much i like the idea of waking up to a brand new life almost every day...

[Valentine]

Love it and the picture. Happy to be reading you again. Valentine

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm forever confusing the haiku with the senryu style. I love your offering, Phill!

[J. J. Nightingale]

Wonderful... I am a fan of the HAIKU...

NICE



Well done..

Jazzy