Blind Unsocial Obedience

Be true to yourself ….

Blind Unsocial Obedience

Did a cosmic fluctuation of nothing

Create this vast universe we inhabit

Or were we brought forth into being

And are sustained by a great Creator

We can speculate on the whys of life

But can we rely on primeval instinct

For the suppositions of our behaviour

Without the need for spiritual counsel

The perimeters between good and evil

Can sometimes be opinion interpretable

And well meaning intentions can harm

If not sensitively executed graciously

The search for truthful dependability

Is only allusive if you do not seek it

Thus spontaneous shocks of realities

Are needed to correct asinine actions

Sadly many souls are enviousness filled

From seduction attractions of the few

Creating false idols to blindly worship

Ignoring the consequence of illusions

But it is written satan’s rebellion failed

Resulting in him being cast out of heaven

And in our own personal promised lands

Do we risk becoming labelled a fallen angel

Is not protecting our unique individuality

Living a productive passionate experience

With charitable deeds and shared concepts

More positive than blind unsocial obedience

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

"But it is written satan’s rebellion failed

Resulting in him being cast out of heaven

And in our own personal promised lands

Do we risk becoming labelled a fallen angel"

I love this verse. We were created from light but like the devil we gravitate to the darkness. Your thoughts are profound and your writing is very meaningful here.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Many thanks for your review and thoughtful comments - :-)

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

You are welcome :)