Superstring Relationship

Superstring Relationship

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Hummmmm ...

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Superstring Relationship



Which reality

Do you choose to occupy

For it’s not in mine


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2019

© 2019 Phill Oz O'fee


Author's Note

Phill Oz O'fee
Superstring theory is an attempt to explain all of the particles and fundamental forces of nature in one theory by modeling them as vibrations of tiny supersymmetric strings.

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Even knowing nothing about your theory, I have always had a generalized notion that we are all connected by energy which could easily be viewed as string-like. To me, your poem acknowledges how we can let someone live in our head, even tho we think we've gotten them out of our lives. Here, the narrator obviously has cleansed all heartstrings, actual & virtual *wink! wink!* Always enjoy your thought-provoking ideas (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wonder if one can cross over into another person's reality..
hummmm..maybe it is only possible in our thoughts and dreams..

Thought provoking !!

Jazzy

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

If you find a red rose on your pillow in the morning - well - I will have proved its possible. Thank.. read more
J. J.  Nightingale

5 Years Ago

I'll check for that rose...... You are welcome...:).
Thank you 'Maggie' glad you liked the 'connection' - I certainly liked the (((HUGS))) ... :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


This speaks to me of perhaps a one sided relationship, or a tale of unrequited love. As if longingly asking someone, 'if not in this reality, is there a reality in which we are together?'
I wasn't aware of the term ' superstring theory', so thanks for teaching me something too! I might go read about it

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Lovely Lilly with lush complementary words - your comments are much appreciated... :-)
An interesting theory to write something about, but it certainly helps figure out each step and reason to a relationship, if two people are confused. Great job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Than yo very much for your kind review my friend... :-)
More often than I care to admit, i've come across people whose reality doesn't jibe with mine

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Ditto my friend - thank you for reading and your kind review...:-)
Even knowing nothing about your theory, I have always had a generalized notion that we are all connected by energy which could easily be viewed as string-like. To me, your poem acknowledges how we can let someone live in our head, even tho we think we've gotten them out of our lives. Here, the narrator obviously has cleansed all heartstrings, actual & virtual *wink! wink!* Always enjoy your thought-provoking ideas (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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