Naive

Naive

A Poem by Phoen-ix

I know too much-
have felt too much,
and now I cannot go back. 

© 2016 Phoen-ix



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short and amazing poem. love it incredible keep it up

Posted 1 Year Ago


incredibly short, incredibly good.

Posted 1 Year Ago


LOL, Yes. "Ignorance is bliss" It is hard to gain true insight and not feel the weight of the world. Well said.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I agree with what you wrote. Good job!!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Straight up truth! Cheers Starz

Posted 1 Year Ago


This really does seem like a wonderfully universal puzzle piece, your readers can fit so many different things in here. What were you thinking of when you wrote this?

Posted 1 Year Ago


and yet we all really know nothing at all ...

your poem seems to pinpoint time and space, asks the reader to question further ... I like that x

Posted 1 Year Ago



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