The Rose - Collaboration With Einstein Noodles

Thanks buddy .... we created something pretty cool !!

She woke delightfully from her dream

Unfurled her curves and gown without a seam

She knew times beyond her dawn

In lustrous color and wilder form

At bay side waters she sat alone

Whistling tunes of meadows many tones

Splashes of blue ...splashes of red

from shore to shore she lifts her head

Maybe a lonely night was through

A day has made a difference too

As romance stood shading her

Lovers leap and passions stir

A gleaming fragrant morning glow

Sheds petals of pure rain in wind and snow

Having pushed through tired rock and soil

Imbuing thoughts of linens' lemon coyle

05/28/2019

Lingering Soul and E.

Reviews

[lightsong]

I already expressed on my review to Mr. E how this poem is special, You two got along together perfectly, reading some of Your poems and as I know of Mr. E pen from before, I think You the two have something similar in Your styles, there is a kind of mysterious mystic touch in them. Well done both of You, wonderful poets and friends.

[B]

Thank you Light

[Kelly Scheppers]

The rose, my favorite! Its passion is undeniable, as is the flow of this collaboration. One could not help but feel the glow.

[B]

Thanks kelly
The glow of nature and it’s beauty
Yes

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is excellent, sounds as one voice...you guys work well together...i really like the allegory...i think i will just see this as being about a flower...i don't want to go all "voyeur" on you guys....
:))))

nicely done...

yes there is that morning glow after a night of passion, isn't there?

j.

[B]

Thanks Jacob
For me it was the innocence of nature
Making all that is of norms
Magical