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A Poem by Platus
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© 2010 Platus



Author's Note

Platus
Inspired by the song 4:33

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This is the first time I've encountered a poem of this style. I say, you really have your own way of writing that (surprisingly) didn't even involve words. This is a very cunning and witty poem. I think what's amazing in this is because every reader can plug in his or her own words and still retain the essence of this poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow. Your poetry is really unique and thought provoking. Who is your muse?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Actually, I quite like this.(:


Posted 7 Years Ago


I don't know if I could consider this poetry, but it sure is interesting... ?
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Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice thats very creative

Posted 7 Years Ago


haha, very interesting... no words, but creative and thought-provoking. Although I don't think of it as a piece of poetry, I think people can see this in many different ways. Cool.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

weird

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm not sure what to make of this, it fascinates me to sit here and wonder what the omitted words actually were, or if they existed. Whatever your thoughts were when you made this, they were so creative, because this is one of the strangest, coolest, turn-your-head-sideways-and-look-at-funny things I've ever seen.
This makes me happy.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on February 5, 2010
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