Emo Poetry in Iambic Pentameter

Emo Poetry in Iambic Pentameter

A Poem by Platus

I created a contest for original poems, and all I got was whiny poems about death written in a strict meter. Here's what I think of it, written in a similar style to "Finnegan's Wake."


Speakingly softness says he he hee

My tongueisness easyspeaks on the miseryme

Asked me you for newness?

No? Bah!

I no to you.

Being my meness

And me contesting you

Dashed you by me

If youwrite poemsong by you for me

I unlike it

I disnotunlike it




© 2010 Platus

Author's Note

Yes, I understand the hypocrisy of complaining about unoriginal writing while borrowing from someone else's style. Sue me.

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Wow what mockery you have here. I'm not sure if it's a good or a bad thing but this is surely entertaining. Honestly, I was shocked at the very first line because I was expecting a really coherent sentence but eventually as I read on, it gets better.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 7 Years Ago

I like the hypocrisy and I understand your yearning for originality. I can not say that I have ever seen anyone write quite like you before, for whatever that matters!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on March 30, 2010
Last Updated on March 30, 2010