Asylum

And now my soul seeks asylum 

Long after my fingertips trace the outline 

Of every dream we had 

written 

On the curves of my 

Body 

Hidden from the world

Bones crack against each breath 

What should've been 

My moment 

finally 

To know 

love 

Unequivocally 

Was waiting room walls that closed in 

Spreading  the darkness 

Dreams of diamonds on my fingers 

Slipping like 

The panic crushing 

Cracking bones each time I tried to breathe 

That house in

Maine 

on the edge of the ocean

the life we created inside 

Stitched forever in my mind 

Your promises

Loving me to madness 

While we watched waves break 

For eternity 

As I learned to love myself 

Through your lust 

And dark obsession 

That dream fading

A kaleidoscope of promises 

Etched into my memory 

You remain my shadow in mystery 

While I self destruct 

So beautifully 

Red wine pain

Flows from my veins

Alone now

I'll die a thousand more times 

While silently screaming 

Your name .. 

-Poetic Angel

Reviews

[Nickdykstra]

Great creation you did here. Keep up the good work..

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you...

[wordman]

passion,and a deep longing for a love
that is no longer tangible,a hurt that makes her ill
powerful write !

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you so much..

[wordman]

my pleasure !

[Pete]

Yes, this evokes passion. Deep images and wording.

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you...

[Moupran]

Your writings...drive passion..

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you , for reading & commenting

[Moupran]

U r welcome