Please don't leave me

Please don't leave me.Everyone else already has I can't bear to loose you too.You know that so why are you walking away?Why does everyone I care for leave me?Do I have a big sign on my back that says "please come into my life and care for me then leave?"If so, will someone please take it off.I have too many scars on my heart from people leaving.I love you so please don't leave me too.

Reviews

[Francis Orion]

Wow, the fear of losing someone is hard. I know, I've felt that way, and just want plead with all your heart to keep them. I hope they stayed in your life. I don't know if you did space after the punctuation on purpose, but it adds to the pleas. Nice heart felt work.

[Raveness]

Thank so much. Unfortunately I"m still in the current predicament I was in when I was writing this poem. I'm pleased however, that you enjoyed :)

[Francis Orion]

Awe...sorry, but your welcome. Best wishes :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A short story that told a complete tale. I could feel the need and the desperation in the words. Thank you for sharing the powerful story.
Coyote

[Raveness]

Thank you love :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[Nattalie Gordon]

I did a double take, I thought "did I write this or did Raveness just read my mind?"
I like it, I feel the EXACT same way!

[Raveness]

Thanks so much!

[Nattalie Gordon]

You're welcome:) if n when u have time check out my story titled 'IT.'

[Raveness]

ok i will :)

[RazzySkittles]

It sounds like the person is really sad, or lonely. I feel that this is a good piece because it's something that a variety of people can relate to I'm sure. Every one has felt alone at some point in time during their lives I think, weather it was brief or for a prolonged period of time.