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A Poem by Steven

Sometimes I think I
can taste all of the hotel
rooms we had sex in.






© 2013 Steven


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If the smell of most hotel rooms is any indication of the taste...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

11 Years Ago

Now you got it...
Hello Steven, this is very sensuous...you capture the essence well using taste, I like the hint of ambiguity too, insomuch as it could be good or bad...wonderful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

11 Years Ago

Thanks V, nice to see you on here.
mmmm...sounds like a bad aftertaste. Have you tried Listerine Zero? It works well after coffee, just so you know...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

11 Years Ago

Bad in certain ways, good in others... Listerine is painful. Do you like that?
Muse

11 Years Ago

well it's better than orange juice and toothpaste...lol yes, changing the subject.
Steven

11 Years Ago

so evasive.. ;)

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Added on April 21, 2013
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