broken...so broken

broken...so broken

A Poem by quinfinn
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this is a sad one with tribute to the genius of Chris Isaak

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it seems like yesterday
"world was on fire and no one could save me but you"
i was looking into your eyes
who can see me now?
"i never dreamed that i'd love somebody like you"
not long ago i was caressing your face...
now my touch is unwanted
i remember the last time you smiled at me... forced, rehearsed, not genuine
i miss the loving smiles you once gave to me
my senses ache for that rapture still
"no, i don't wanna fall in love"
i've gotten past the tears and anger
but those deepest wounds will never heal
my greatest fears are now realized
true love never really dies
"what a wicked game you play to make me feel this way"
you had a painful past, the type that damages one forever
"this girl is only gonna break your heart"
my past was one of heartache and hardship, the damage was done before we began...how were we to know?
"nobody loves no one"
this tragedy is blameless and i hold no grudge
only my heart in my outstretched hands
and lingering questions

© 2011 quinfinn


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This is sad. It's a poetic tragedy. But it holds a lot of truth in it. It's interesting how something so depressing can be so good,. It's hard to do, but you did it. Great write. :]

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quinfinn
quinfinn

somewhere in the mountains, NC



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i am Quin.i love poetry..don't request me to read your books, not interested. i encourage youthful writers to expand on their skills, embrace their gift, i don't tolerate big egos and hard critics, ca.. more..

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