Black Box

Black Box

A Poem by Quaddeth
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This really is just a poem about being trapped inside of comfort, I wrote it last night after being peeved by this thought and I wasn't able to sleep until I got it down.

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This little black box, it encapsulates me

It makes me free

I confide in it

It confides in me

It keeps me out

I have room to flee

  as I ease

  slowly forward

  lonely coward

loosing himself in his false sense of security


© 2010 Quaddeth



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Quaddeth
I'd have to say this is one of my favourites that i've written. Please review in a constructive manner.

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There is a rich, personal depth to the confessions found in this poem. You give us such a visually stirring work, allowing us to sense something vividly that takes place within your mind.. that sense of being trapped and loosed as well. Very profoundly moving!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It seems the best way to be at times but how much do we lose ourselves in that state?:) This is suffocating, in a good way lol xx

Posted 6 Years Ago


THIS IS STRANGLY TRUE...
A FEELING OF HAVING PEACE...
IN A SENSE...
THIS ONE SPOT...
THAT JUST SO HAPPENS...
TO BE IN OUR HEADS...
I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS...
DEFINETLY ONE OF YOU BEST...
A FAVORITE OF MINE...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow. Powerful. It's amazing how the little things can make one connect to it! I think we've all felt like we get trapped in a "false sense of security," feeling as though we're lost in a big, scary world, our security blanket having been torn from us.

Posted 7 Years Ago


How interesting that the subject matter peeved you until you penned it. I know this well. Love so this short but complex work also.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Que
This is absolutely lovely.
Written with simplicity, you managed to create a perfect image in my minds' eye.
Amazing job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


There is a rich, personal depth to the confessions found in this poem. You give us such a visually stirring work, allowing us to sense something vividly that takes place within your mind.. that sense of being trapped and loosed as well. Very profoundly moving!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it everyone needs something to confide in.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Quaddeth
Quaddeth

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