Tiny Treasures

Tiny Treasures

A Poem by Light


Tiny Treasures 

Give me a moment in time 
inside the innocence's spell 
under the blanket of fantasy
Where fingerprints were fireflies
dancing over the big windows 
and bare foot roaming free
with mud and loud laughters 
a whole world is made from 
tiny fabricated treasures 
ships from papers 
a mermaid and her prince 
living in a castle 
inside little girl's head
full of dreams
full of fervor
cartoon themes take me 
in the wondrous adventures
where hopes meet the stars
and dreams turn into a 
believed world.

© Gh~*
1.Nov.2017


© 2017 Light



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Golly dear sweet Light your poems get better and better every time I read one and this one sure makes my heart yearn and a tears fall soft cause I always wanted children but my hubby did not make it back from Afghanistan and some times I wonder if I'll ever fall in love again but this is not about me it is about the wonders and beauty of children and how they play and dream of adventures and I wish I had that prince right now i always dreamed of when I was just a little girl, I love it so much how you so easily express your heart and heavenly nature in your words -- thank you with much love! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

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Sammi

1 Week Ago

My heart to you Light you are just precious! 💗
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Light

1 Week Ago

Thank You sweetest dear, Starry Sammi 🌟



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Golly dear sweet Light your poems get better and better every time I read one and this one sure makes my heart yearn and a tears fall soft cause I always wanted children but my hubby did not make it back from Afghanistan and some times I wonder if I'll ever fall in love again but this is not about me it is about the wonders and beauty of children and how they play and dream of adventures and I wish I had that prince right now i always dreamed of when I was just a little girl, I love it so much how you so easily express your heart and heavenly nature in your words -- thank you with much love! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

Posted 1 Week Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sammi

1 Week Ago

My heart to you Light you are just precious! 💗
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Light

1 Week Ago

Thank You sweetest dear, Starry Sammi 🌟
A girl (a boy, too) with sailboats in dreams,
the sweetest of naïve and innocent schemes …

the gentlest of the most tenderful touch,
in their world of fireflies and ever-so much

that dances and swirls, colors in a kaleidoscope,
ever learning, the world keeps turning, never lose hope*


I know it is about You, and how appropriately blissful it is, too, and I did not think you'd mind if my little boy played with your little girl. : )
Your song choice is the perfect adventurous accoutrement to set the spirit bounding and free, and a perfect title, too … it is a precious writing.
Seldom, Dear GH, I read a piece that inspires a poem from my ragged olde pen, but the purity and sweetness of your heart sings a soft yearning song that inspired my soul in ways it could not deny.

Bless you and all your stars above with laughter and love … warmest smiles to You* ⁓ Richard ✨

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

Of course! he is so very welcome to come a play anytime, to forget about anything else around in thi.. read more
Your poem'sis full of beautiful make-believe that adults should be allowed to hold precious as they age! Tis sad how we're told be 'grow up, live in the real world'. But when you compare the latter with the innocence and charm of once upon a time.. why should we!! Escapism now and again is a beautiful relief!

You've se your gentle words so very elegantly; the language is concise yet has such a sensitive tone - as always, You've left a happy trail behind you. Thank you so much for sharing..

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

I think if all the people around the world, kept that child's heart pure, unaffected with all what's.. read more
emmajoy

2 Weeks Ago

What wonderful wishes you've sent me, THANK YOU, dear Light.
'where hopes meet the stars
and dreams turn into a
believed world.'
Ahh, this is lovely to think of. I've read this piece more than a couple of times in the past few days and each time gives me the soothing effect I so crave in writings. I believe your font colour has a part to play in that too ;)
A most ethereal write, I'd say :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

Lovely words and warming praise dear Yumna, Your review surly makes me really happy and knowing it a.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Weeks Ago

You're welcome, Light. Always a pleasure reading good works :))
The innocence of childhood *_____* what a lovely time we all want to live again ! You captured it perfectly and so delicately. I can see you put great care in evoking the images associated with this, you drew in some of them intensively from our collective human experience. Such an enjoyable reading, loved it ! :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

What a really lovely and thoughtful review my friend! I so warmly thank You for taking the time to r.. read more
Light! I missed you... Almost forgot how crazy good of a writer you are... Ethereal messages here... Made my eyebrows arch at how spectacularly crisp and clean your presentation and rhymes are... A mermaid and her prince... Loved it...!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

Hhh! Still Your stealing is a creative one ;)
Silente

2 Weeks Ago

Lol... I like your style, Light... You are damn right I creatively steal...! Rofl
Light

2 Weeks Ago

Yes You did ;)
Thank you for this beautiful insight into a child's head. Sometimes we all need to go back there and enjoy what we cannot have otherwise. Lovely piece.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

Hi again my friend, yes that was what my poem about, the little girl of me is still till this moment.. read more
aine

2 Weeks Ago

Well said! :)
its the simple things, bare necessities, thats sort of what comes to mind when reading this, its a really good poem, definitely of higher quality than alot of stuff you see on this site. Did you make a tyoe and spell windrow instead of window?
Anyway, enjoyed it i think I'll read more of your stuff

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

Of course I meant "Hi" my friend! This tablet of mine ahhh😑
JackValor86

2 Weeks Ago

no really its of higher quality for this site, I've been looking through alot of random stuff and so.. read more
Light

2 Weeks Ago

Thank You again, it's my pleasure my new friend*
I just cant stop reading it again n again

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

You trully warm my heart with happiness, Thank You 🌟🌟🌟
U have created a magical land honestly speaking....ur words are magical 😍

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

Awa! Very very sweetly lovely You are to me and to my humble poem, I can't thank You enough 💖

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Added on November 1, 2017
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Tags: Childhood, Personal, Cartoon, Memory

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