Over Your Lips~

Over Your Lips~

A Poem by Light





Calmed, it's midnight

my restless heartbeats

loosen into whispers

smoothly, flowing in the air

softly then, I'm laid

over Your sleeping lips

 

To gift You

a little bit of my essence

my breath

warm and vibrant

wanting You alive

wanting You a bliss   

gentle as a dewdrop

my existence dances

over Your awaking lips 


~

I'm made

from words

and beyond them, deep

my truth is revealed


with a kiss

 slowly I'm becoming

Heaven.


©  Gh ~*

6.Dec.2017






© 2017 Light



Author's Note

Light
just a little something this evening.

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that was so beautiful ! I loved reading it, I loved picturing it, I could feel the emotion, I enjoyed the word choice and the way you played with the senses, particularly with hearing. Not to mention this is a topic I can hardly imagine any reader being indifferent to. I bet we all thought of our own special someone either from the present or from the past whose lips would trigger such desire in us lol
Great job !

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Days Ago

Hi my friend :)

Thank You so much for reading my poem with a heartfelt and real feeli.. read more



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Brasutifully laid, beautifully worded, beautiful in meaning. This is love, ' my existence dances
over Your awaking lips .'

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

2 Days Ago

five smiles to make ten characters!
Light

2 Days Ago

:) :) :) :) :)
emmajoy

2 Days Ago

I'm; really laughing now!! xx
that was so beautiful ! I loved reading it, I loved picturing it, I could feel the emotion, I enjoyed the word choice and the way you played with the senses, particularly with hearing. Not to mention this is a topic I can hardly imagine any reader being indifferent to. I bet we all thought of our own special someone either from the present or from the past whose lips would trigger such desire in us lol
Great job !

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Days Ago

Hi my friend :)

Thank You so much for reading my poem with a heartfelt and real feeli.. read more
Outstandingly romantic and mesmerizing. You reveal the essence of true magic.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

3 Days Ago

You are praiseworthy and welcome.
Light

3 Days Ago

Thank You, yet again 😊
Sami Khalil

3 Days Ago

:::::)))))))))))))))
Truly beautiful. Your piece is amorous and absolutely breathtaking. Your use of vocabulary is gorgeous, and I can't help but fall in love with the descriptions.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Days Ago

Dear friend, You are generously wonderful to me, that my poem has pleased You truly warms my heart, .. read more
PandaPeaceful

4 Days Ago

All the thanks to you, for releasing such an exceptional poem.
Light

4 Days Ago

Again, my most sincere "Thank You" 😊
The midnight hour can bring about a myriad of emotions as you so often write about and this poem is no exception. A well written freestyle poem filled with words that the reader can feel through out its entirety. Angelheart

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Days Ago

Thank You so much my friend for Your thoughtful review and kind words, all is much appreciated,
Angelheart1

4 Days Ago

You are most welcome my friend.
Gentle, wonderful and tender use of words and thoughts. You made the reader believe you. The description was amazing and had had the feel of real life and real desire. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Days Ago

Thank You! for Your wonderful print and sweet words upon my page, I'm deeply grateful for Your time .. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Days Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
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Gee
The greatest compliment I can give is this is a piece that so easily could have been written by EmmaJ.
Beautiful

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Light

4 Days Ago

Thank You for Your compliment and kind read, much appreciated*
I had to hold my breath as I read this. I'm beyond words. Romantic...it settled upon my heart like a soft fog. So delicate.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Days Ago

So sincerely beautiful are Your words my friend, thank You so very much for this lovely gift from Yo.. read more
+she plays with matches+

4 Days Ago

I had to put your poem in my library of favorites.
Light

4 Days Ago

me and my poem, humbly bowing*
yes, quite the sensual and romantic piece...interesting phrasing in spots makes this different enough...that it sings of its own identity...

j.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Days Ago

Thank You my friend for Your sweet thoughts of my poem, all much appreciated, Your kind read and tim.. read more
A wonderful “little something” my friend. Your graceful words dance Lightly like the kiss of a golden butterfly and jewels flow from your pen. This poem is simply mesmerizing...

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Days Ago

Hi my "new" Annette :)

Thank You for another lovely gift, like always Your words flo.. read more

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