Over Your Lips~

Over Your Lips~

A Poem by Light





Calmed, it's midnight

my restless heartbeats

loosen into whispers

smoothly, flowing in the air

softly then, I'm laid

over Your sleeping lips

 

To gift You

a little bit of my essence

my breath

warm and vibrant

wanting You alive

wanting You a bliss   

gentle as a dewdrop

my existence dances

over Your awaking lips 


~

I'm made

from words

and beyond them, deep

my truth is revealed


with a kiss

 slowly I'm becoming

Heaven.


©  Gh ~*

6.Dec.2017






© 2017 Light



Author's Note

Light
just a little something this evening.

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that was so beautiful ! I loved reading it, I loved picturing it, I could feel the emotion, I enjoyed the word choice and the way you played with the senses, particularly with hearing. Not to mention this is a topic I can hardly imagine any reader being indifferent to. I bet we all thought of our own special someone either from the present or from the past whose lips would trigger such desire in us lol
Great job !

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Hi my friend :)

Thank You so much for reading my poem with a heartfelt and real feeli.. read more



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this is such a beautiful and lovely write.

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Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You my friend for reading and enjoying my poem, I appreciate it so much.
I enjoyed this , you don’t always need big words to say how you feel lovely

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

It's so true my friend! thank You for Your kind visit and review, much appreciated*
oh my, very lovely, very very sensual and something that my love and i often speak of to each other. beautifully done!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You again dear Mark, I'm happy You enjoyed this one and can relate too :)

Many .. read more
so beautiful! the amount of love you managed to express in a few words and the picture you drew is mesmerizing, i enjoyed reading it immensely.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

my real pleasure to receive a wonderful rewarding review like Yours, thank You my friend a bunch of .. read more
Brasutifully laid, beautifully worded, beautiful in meaning. This is love, ' my existence dances
over Your awaking lips .'

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emmajoy

2 Months Ago

five smiles to make ten characters!
Light

2 Months Ago

:) :) :) :) :)
emmajoy

2 Months Ago

I'm; really laughing now!! xx
that was so beautiful ! I loved reading it, I loved picturing it, I could feel the emotion, I enjoyed the word choice and the way you played with the senses, particularly with hearing. Not to mention this is a topic I can hardly imagine any reader being indifferent to. I bet we all thought of our own special someone either from the present or from the past whose lips would trigger such desire in us lol
Great job !

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Hi my friend :)

Thank You so much for reading my poem with a heartfelt and real feeli.. read more
Outstandingly romantic and mesmerizing. You reveal the essence of true magic.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

You are praiseworthy and welcome.
Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You, yet again 😊
Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

:::::)))))))))))))))
Truly beautiful. Your piece is amorous and absolutely breathtaking. Your use of vocabulary is gorgeous, and I can't help but fall in love with the descriptions.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Dear friend, You are generously wonderful to me, that my poem has pleased You truly warms my heart, .. read more
PandaPeaceful

2 Months Ago

All the thanks to you, for releasing such an exceptional poem.
Light

2 Months Ago

Again, my most sincere "Thank You" 😊
The midnight hour can bring about a myriad of emotions as you so often write about and this poem is no exception. A well written freestyle poem filled with words that the reader can feel through out its entirety. Angelheart

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for Your thoughtful review and kind words, all is much appreciated,
Angelheart1

2 Months Ago

You are most welcome my friend.
Gentle, wonderful and tender use of words and thoughts. You made the reader believe you. The description was amazing and had had the feel of real life and real desire. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You! for Your wonderful print and sweet words upon my page, I'm deeply grateful for Your time .. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

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