moonbeat

moonbeat

A Poem by Light






I inspire
the twilight behind
world horizon
to melt through the mist 
weep nectar
over the promised flowers

driven by 
the miracle of birth
from the genuine sky 
sipping few drops 
into the hearts 
of the greedy flowers 
the poplar sings 
to the sprinkling aromas
over the blooming petals

flowing from there
I feel You
with the purest emotion
the sensation of Your spirit
wrapping my muse
and with a passionate release
You fall over my sheet 
birthing loving words
each time I inspire You
from behind the haze
each time I create 
a moonbeat.

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28.Dec.2016


© 2017 Light



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Peaceful and gentle, your words are soothing. The imagery is so beautiful and the painting you chose to accompany your words is stunning. "you fall over my sheet"...not sure if this is the muse you are referring to or if it is a sensual line. In either case, I liked it! :) lydi**

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Think of it in the two ways my friend ;)

Thank You so much for these lovely and beaut.. read more



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Moonbeat , moonbeat, beat me a band-- one pure like honey, on the wings of a song- just delectable and sensual - all things mystifying and gracious wrapped into one🌹

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

beautiful little poem that holds the meaning of my humble poem, thank You again dear Kelly, You are .. read more
Thoughts In Time

1 Month Ago

My pleasure🌹
Verily, verily I say unto you, you are wonderful and your poetry has a soothing, healing effect. You are inspirational...

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

I wouldn't ask for more... more than this precious praises and most warming gratification to my poet.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

You are most welcome...
Very lovely write I enjoyed each image that came out through your words;-]

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You my friend, so happy that You found it lovely and that You've enjoyed it :)

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I'm terrible at critiquing, so i'll just say this: Great work. I enjoyed the imagery (a cat leaped over my keyboard just now, thought I'd toss that irrelevant piece of information in here), the peaceful and auspicious flow of words, and, of course, the title, Moonbeat. Very exotic and intriguing, I must say

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Months Ago

to me, You are so very far from "terrible", but speaking sincerely from Your mind and heart, my deep.. read more
beautiful poem!! you have great skill and heart,

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Months Ago

That's very sweet from You to say, thank You so warmly much :)
I'm a newbie here, pleez also review, comment my first poem here, wud luv to know your thoughts, I'm navigating the site looking for poem pals. Merry Xmas.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Months Ago

Don't worry my friend, I will :)
As a moonloover the title caught my attention, and u created a new term, 'moon beat" sounds super. The poem is so awesome, sentimental n ends on sweet love notes. Beautiful word choice. Kudos.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your kind visit and sweet words from a moon lover made it even better :)
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Such a beautiful poem. I reread each line absorbing the imagery in each. So well written, so calming to read. Please keep writing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Months Ago

Oh! Thank You so warmly for Your heartfelt and beautiful review, I so appreciate the sincere feeling.. read more
Understanding love's great connection an mysterious influence on the heart and mind - and body too. A fab write Little Flower. Have a good day. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Light

4 Months Ago

Very true dear Kitty, and so very happy to read Your wonderful words and see Your sweetest presence .. read more
kitty

4 Months Ago

Same here. The festive season is taking its toll. It'll be over in a jiff, then its New Years Resolu.. read more
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such beauty in this piece, feels magical and yet laced with love.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

Hi Mark my new friend :)

Thank You so much for Your kind visit today, Your sweet revi.. read more
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4 Months Ago

you are very welcome Light. I enjoy the purity of your poems, been quickly reading a few, just love.. read more
Light

4 Months Ago

Thank You, again*

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Added on December 12, 2017
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Tags: Spiritual, Writing, Creating, Personal, Inspirational, Fantasy

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