moonbeat

moonbeat

A Poem by Light






I inspire
the twilight behind
world horizon
to melt through the mist 
weep nectar
over the promised flowers

driven by 
the miracle of birth
from the genuine sky 
sipping few drops 
into the hearts 
of the greedy flowers 
the poplar sings 
to the sprinkling aromas
over the blooming petals

flowing from there
I feel You
with the purest emotion
the sensation of Your spirit
wrapping my muse
and with a passionate release
You fall over my sheet 
birthing loving words
each time I inspire You
from behind the haze
each time I create 
a moonbeat.

©  Gh ~*  
28.Dec.2016


© 2017 Light



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I'm terrible at critiquing, so i'll just say this: Great work. I enjoyed the imagery (a cat leaped over my keyboard just now, thought I'd toss that irrelevant piece of information in here), the peaceful and auspicious flow of words, and, of course, the title, Moonbeat. Very exotic and intriguing, I must say

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Week Ago

to me, You are so very far from "terrible", but speaking sincerely from Your mind and heart, my deep.. read more



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Beautiful scenery and word which capture so well a very secial moment-here you are close to the heart of existence and to life itself-Great writing

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You so much my friend for Your wonderful review and insightful words, ( you are close to the h.. read more
George Coombs

1 Month Ago

Your welcome, a good weekend to you also
Fluid, triumphant. As Nature arises and completes, love arises and completes...eloquent words snd metaphor bursting with dramatic imagery and ripe emotion...graceful flow, cadence. Lyrical, wonderful write!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You, so much dear Annette for such wonderfully graceful words, beauty shines from Your review!
I saw it your poem in morning before i went to the dentist. So I was wonder if you get any reviews. Your style use very elegant words and expression. There is lot of beautiful and sweet scenery. But is not just some sweet thoughts. You using symbols and metaphors to show us more deepest thoughts and scenery. Only my thoughts what you can try diffirent is , maybe you can try another form try more explore meaning of writing words. Otherwise very nice poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1975 MCMlXXV

1 Month Ago

I am glad there is no harm. I think one of the reason why people don't give me reviews. Is cause I t.. read more
Light

1 Month Ago

a very poetic Thursday for You too my friend, and thank You! please keep giving me Your honest thoug.. read more
1975 MCMlXXV

1 Month Ago

And you too same. Thanks for your reviews and your presence here.

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Added on December 12, 2017
Last Updated on December 15, 2017
Tags: Spiritual, Writing, Creating, Personal, Inspirational, Fantasy

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~..... and know that Love isn't in the beauty of my words but Love is in the thumps taking the lead of my heart, unto Yours that I'm not the dream but the reality dwells in the miracle .. more..

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