The mist of rain (Life's Rhythm)

The mist of rain (Life's Rhythm)

A Poem by Light






did You ever 
hear a heart
singing like the rain 
or a spirit's voice 
defying like thunder 
did You ever 
watch me fall
feel me melt 
then from streams 
I'm re-made,
Up,
through the vapor

did You ever
hear me, in the dews
over the fresh petals
signing a harmony 
larger than You
more than, 
a mere being 
a creature of
forever

my core beats 
heavenbeats
in each thrum
I am existing
everywhere

everywhere

like a sky melts
through air
shaped through
the mist of rain 

everywhere

in the fragrance of 
cherry blossoms
in the ancient
frankincense.



© Gh~*
28.Jan.2018


© 2018 Light



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Life giving and healing without itvwe cannot exist- and the beauty and healing powers of Frankincense- just beautiful- u capture the beauty of the invisible and bring it to life , wonderful poem - as if I’m in the midst of the mist-wonderful soft and gentle🌹

Posted 2 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You my lovely friend for the gifts of Your time and understanding of my words, I'm so warmly g.. read more
Thoughts In Time

2 Months Ago

Only my greatest pleasure🌹🦋🌈



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Yes, cherry blossoms and frankincense.
As always, you enlighten my soul.
Another favorite.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Days Ago

Traci, You really overwhelmed me today that I don't know how to reward Your kindness, but I promise .. read more
Although this one is full of physical imagery, the words could be the voice of a higher level of consciousness,
"a creature of forever." In one verse we hear this: "I am existing everywhere," followed by the repetition "everywhere," as though to make the statement more emphatic. Though this poet has often merged the spiritual with the erotic, here we get more of a purely spiritual presentation, albeit expressed with sensual images. The last two verses reflect this sensuality to a high degree, to the point where one can almost smell the cherry blossoms. A delightful piece here.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Morning dear John,

thank You for Your kind review and the wonderful words, I'm glad Y.. read more
Wonderful, beautiful and kind words shared. I liked the questions asked and visions create by your good words. Thank you my friend for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

the many thanks go to You, for Your time reading me today, for gracing my pages with Your kind prese.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

I liked the photo too and you are welcome my friend.
Light

2 Months Ago

You are really so kind to all of us here, Thank You yet again so much*
Deeeppp thoughts...thnk u sir for sharing Ur precious thoughts...I love to read Ur poems

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

no worries at all my friend, actually You brought a big smile to my face with Your word, so thank Yo.. read more
Govind singh

2 Months Ago

Ur wlcm...u deserve much more...pls keep writing...
Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You, again :)
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Spellbinding are your words, dear Light. While writing this breathtaking piece , you became one with Nature. I could go on and on. Just to say this poem is a firm favorite.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

So very pleased to see You find my words like this, because it's what I want.

Bless Y.. read more
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2 Months Ago

May you attain all your dreams friend. Thank you for being my friend, dear Light🌸
Light

2 Months Ago

May Yours too, and thank YOU too!
✨✨💖💖💖✨✨
What an imagination to write something so beautiful. Very generous sharing something like this with us

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Very kindly sweet to say this my friend! I'm grateful for Your visit and reading, and surely will ma.. read more
Like a lot of things we only appreciate them fully, when there gone, extinct, no longer!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

so we better open our eyes wide, to the seen and the unseen, with appreciation :)

th.. read more
The answer to your poem is "yes I have", and you have expressed it in a way that is wonderful and unique. To be all alone in the wild, miles away from any civilization, feeling the divine through the rawness of nature is unforgettable and life changing. I loved the flow of your poem and how "everywhere" stands out apart demanding our attention. Your poem reminded be of a backpacking trip some time ago when i was in the middle of somewhere and one single solitary lightning strike melted away all doubt and discomfort I was having at the time. That was strange, but this work of yours is not. Awesome write. CD

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Ohh! so lovely to read this "yes" and this wonderful review from You, I was flowing with Your journe.. read more
CD Campbell

2 Months Ago

Yes! Nature tends to do that. I haven't figured out emojis on here so "thumbs up" lol
Light

2 Months Ago

lol "thumbs up" 👍👍
I will make sure to visit You so soon!
This was a very enchanting piece. Your wonderful flow and word choices, did nothing but melt reality away and put you in this lovely poem. Great work and a fantastic piece.
-Richard

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Oh! How very lovely Your words are! so lovely and sweet to this heart, Thank You, kindly* warmly*
Richard McLin

2 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely poetry.
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The quiet of this poem...the peacefulness...is a place I want to be for a long time. There is a spirituality peeking out between the lines and a love of nature. You touch on all the senses here. Just beautiful. Lydi**

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Light

2 Months Ago

Thanking You deeply my friend, for this lovely gift You've graced me, and my page with, my pleasure .. read more

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