The mist of rain (Life's Rhythm)

The mist of rain (Life's Rhythm)

A Poem by Light






did You ever 
hear a heart
singing like the rain 
or a spirit's voice 
defying like thunder 
did You ever 
watch me fall
feel me melt 
then from streams 
I'm re-made,
Up,
through the vapor

did You ever
hear me, in the dews
over the fresh petals
signing a harmony 
larger than You
more than, 
a mere being 
a creature of
forever

my core beats 
heavenbeats
in each thrum
I am existing
everywhere

everywhere

like a sky melts
through air
shaped through
the mist of rain 

everywhere

in the fragrance of 
cherry blossoms
in the ancient
frankincense.



© Gh~*
28.Jan.2018


© 2018 Light



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LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! This pretty much sums up my homegrown variety of spirituality. The "essence" is in each of us & it's in everything around us & you've shown us how this can be observed in a sparkling abundance of vivid imagery. Your style of probing & questioning makes it feel like a spiritual quest. Many graceful lines crafted with care! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! This pretty much sums up my homegrown variety of spirituality. The "essence" is in each of us & it's in everything around us & you've shown us how this can be observed in a sparkling abundance of vivid imagery. Your style of probing & questioning makes it feel like a spiritual quest. Many graceful lines crafted with care! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

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You are so lovely my friend, Your heart and spirit are, dancing with understanding over my page, tha.. read more
i love this piece...makes me sing while reading...Fleetwood Mac's song "I wanna be with you everywhere"

a very comforting, image laden piece of poetry.

j.

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Light

1 Week Ago

I should search and listen to that song :)

Thank You for Your reading and kind visit .. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

the song is called "Everywhere" and you can find it on youtube.
Light

1 Week Ago

Thank You :)
Wonderful in all ways, Gh*
Such a powerful title and (expressive touch), and a more gloriously pertinent or perfect picture I cannot imagine.
Your choice of font and color lend a gentle softness to the texture in one's mind, heart, and tender emotions.
The ambiance of your questions in the first two verses involve your readers instantly into the moment, setting the perfect feel, preparing them for the charismatic, almost ethereal, wispiness of being brought ever-so enthrallingly into the realm's mist of your own spirit's embrace.
The sense I'm left with is that of enchantment … as though I am floating✨

*Beautifully expressed, Dear Gh … thank you warmly and sincerely for another gift from your marvelous pen! ⁓ Richard 🌺

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"the realm's mist of your own spirit's embrace", sheer wondrous beauty is embraced within these glor.. read more
A gorgeous poem with wonderful imagery. Harmonious and wondering. Kudos

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Light

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Thank You dear Sami for visiting me and enjoying my poem, to leave me sweet words, it means a lot, n.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Weeks Ago

Same to you. My pleasure.
oh wow! Light...to me this is the best ever God poems i have ever read ...a love song to God ... God's expressions to us in love all around us all the time...and the colloquial use of "did you ever heard.." and " did you ever watched..." are fantastic for me..i love love love this poem...now i may be way off your intent ..but that's what you have given to me..into the ol' library with this one ...its such an honest and pure expression says i
E.
ps i never give point (don't follow them) but i had to give this one 100 ;)

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Light

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I bow Sir E, I humbly bow for every single word You've gifted me here, because each one of them has .. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

your welcome Light...i will be going into me library from time to time to read this again..i think i.. read more
Oh wow! So very beautiful!
I really love this write. So wonderful

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Light

2 Weeks Ago

Hi my friend :)

Thank You for taking the time to read my poem and leave me Your sweet.. read more
'.. did You ever ~ heard me, in the dews ~ over the fresh petals ~ signing a harmony ~ larger than You.. '

That whispers such beautiful feelings.. in fact each and every one of your stanzas has that special magic you use when you write. It's as if you wander a plain far highte than most others.. magical, truly sweetly maical. The picture is perfect too.. ultra woman, ultra emotion. Sighhhhing, dear Light..

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Light

2 Weeks Ago

and You are, dear You* beautiful with a ture feminine spirit*
emmajoy

2 Weeks Ago

Laughing.. thank you so much.. More feminine than tough cookie anyway! We could start a mutual admi.. read more
Light

2 Weeks Ago

Hha! yes why not ;)
“ In each thrum, I am existing everywhere..everywhere”- and you are the splendorous essence of everything dear friend. Iridescence and spirituality and transcendant love are the feelings you paint with your eloquent lilac words and ethereal imagery of the cycle of being- rain to melt to vaporous streams. Absolutely Glorious poem! :)

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Light

3 Weeks Ago

Dear Annette, I know that by now You know how deeply I appreciate and treasure the amazing praises Y.. read more

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