Couplet~

Couplet~

A Poem by Light
"

the thin stream there.

"

 




~

Humbly,

my drops~ there~

immersed in the aura,

embraced by the shades.

deepening, flowing

I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth

with greenish heavenscenes.

~

 

Thou~ my soul.

I prayed for poetry;

until my hands bled.

to know then, I am no more a part,

of human's emotions.

 

Thou~ my soul.

write me over time,

where there is no verse,

but the olde sigh of Sol

lapping Aurora,

with extolled rhythms.

 

 

Couplet~

with the prim rhyme,

of Love kissing life

exhaling Laurels

tuning paradise.

where I don't need to exist,

I am the stream

deepening, flowing

 Him~





©  Gh~*

24.Oct.2018

 

 

 

 


© 2018 Light



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Where on earth did you just come from? There is nothing for me to say or add or ...you left me nothing. This is amazing work that is so original it gives worth to your name. I'm going to have to come back and immerse but this is absolutely original and stunning. Both of those words I hate to use in a review Btw..but you earned it here, Thank you for sharing this! And I might friend request just cause you said no and then threw this on the table so be prepared...hahaha. I'll respect but i will read..wonderful.

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Light

2 Months Ago

You've made my day :) maybe even more days to come :) You left me nothing to say here, Your honesty,.. read more
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thank You again for a deeply heartfelt and beautiful review. it's a real pleasure to became friends .. read more



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This poem is absolutely enchanting, well thought out and very well expressed. The picture suits the poem very nicely, and I really enjoy your font choice as well. The poem itself with its rhymes and meaning are very touching. The imagery is exquisite and very well personified as well. All in all, I am also in agreement with the other reviews left here on this poem, and in short... this piece is absolutely beautiful. Well written, well done!

~Carthage Thorne

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Days Ago

those are wonderfully kind words which I'm humbly and warmly grateful to receive them, my happy plea.. read more
What a glorious wonder and majesty rise in your words. The magnificence of Earth and sky become a music of liquid love, restoring the soul to peace... flowing in a soft silence of joy. Wondrous.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Days Ago

I dearly love the way You painted my poem through Your beautiful profound words, Your "gem" talent i.. read more
An owl on the moon

5 Days Ago

It is all joy to visit your page, dear Light. :)
Oh how not to need to exist just to be...beautiful- i feel the flowing stream, cascading waterfalls and softness of all things thick thin and transparent with much to aware of in the now- just beautiful to feel what is to be felt not to explain or question be ause it us just as we know to be a part of- touching the heart- oh im so grateful for the blessing of one- wonderful words- much love and blessings🌹

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Week Ago

Hi my dear Kelly, missed You my wonderful friend, and from You I always expect deep heartfelt and wi.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Week Ago

You ate always in my heart and thoughts and wisdom you have like none- beauty always graces your pag.. read more
Light

1 Week Ago

Awaa thank You my lovely Kelly, been busy of late, have read some of Your new beautiful pieces and s.. read more
I feel a distance between Earth and mysterious space here, an acceptance of difference, a welcome of what can't be seen but gently incredibly experienced within and about. Whether a cerebral flight of infinite fancy or a drifting nothingness along a path of your own finding.. your words thrill yet calm. I feel replete.

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Light

1 Week Ago

wonderful words and expressions dear Emma, thank You billions for Your own print upon my poem, I dee.. read more
emmajoy

1 Week Ago

Again, my pleasure. There's inevitable calm on your pages. Much needed too. x
Wow! Beautiful and lovely write. Not much else to say. It is beautiful and captivating. Thank you for being you!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Week Ago

Thank YOU for these warming and heartfelt words my friend, You are truly kind and I'm grateful for Y.. read more
gulp, this is pretty damn pretty! What a delicious moment of clarity in a foggy world

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Week Ago

Thank You my friend for Your lovely compliment, Your kind visit is much appreciated.
a beautiful write and imagery

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

good morning form hrtr my frien, and thank You for Your kind words and visit, much appreciated.
 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

my pleasure
The essence of serenity that comes through in these pieces is so hard to describe..They bring me to this calm emotion that so often eludes me....the only way i can describe it would be ...Im set on a wooden raft, flowing down a river without paddles or destination, strewn in silks...only me...as this blind calmness consumes me....as I leak tears from my eyes but do not cry..I cannot scream or laugh....i meld into the scenery..being me without being me...its really this supreme state of being!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

wow my dear friend I LOVE Your words! the serenity that comes from them too, it was as we flew down .. read more
Beautiful and wonderfully written your use of description is amazing well done

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Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You my friend for Your kind visit, I'm pleased that You've enjoyed my poem today.
Your poetry dear Light is from a different plane, so spiritual in its content. "I am the stream deepening, flowing Him. You put soul into that stream. Lovely use of language in this fine poem. All the very best to you.

Chris

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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1 Month Ago

Morning from here my dear Chris, I was JUST about to review Your (Gentle on my Mind) and then I saw .. read more

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