Couplet~

Couplet~

A Poem by Light
"

the thin stream there.

"

 




~

Humbly,

my drops~ there~

immersed in the aura,

embraced by the shades.

deepening, flowing

I am no longer the breath,
I am the wonder honoring Earth

with greenish heavenscenes.

~

 

Thou~ my soul.

I prayed for poetry;

until my hands bled.

to know then, I am no more a part,

of human emotions.

 

Thou~ my soul.

write me over time,

where there is no verse,

but the olde sigh of Sol

lapping Aurora,

with extolled rhythms.

 

 

Couplet~

with the prime rhyme,

of Love kissing life

exhaling Laurels

tuning paradise.

where I don't need to exist,

I am the stream

deepening, flowing

 Him~





©  Gh~*

24.Oct.2018

 

 

 

 

 


© 2019 Light



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Where on earth did you just come from? There is nothing for me to say or add or ...you left me nothing. This is amazing work that is so original it gives worth to your name. I'm going to have to come back and immerse but this is absolutely original and stunning. Both of those words I hate to use in a review Btw..but you earned it here, Thank you for sharing this! And I might friend request just cause you said no and then threw this on the table so be prepared...hahaha. I'll respect but i will read..wonderful.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

You've made my day :) maybe even more days to come :) You left me nothing to say here, Your honesty,.. read more
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A beautiful couplet filled with nature's
unspoken beatitudes of life on earth...
encompassing the virtues of living water
embracing the water colors of my soul...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

and what a really beautifully touching poem Your heart's ink has graced my page with... Thank You my.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

You are more than welcome... your poetry has the ability to discover our innermost thoughts. truly,.. read more
This work is interesting because in the past the poet has presented offerings in which romantic and spiritual love meld as one. Here, however, the emphasis appears to be totally on the spiritual aspect. Indeed, the poem reads like something a mystic of any of the great religious traditions might have written. In the last lines, we read "I am the stream/ deepening, flowing/ Him". It has the sound of a mystic union, where the being has merged with its source. Brilliant images permeate the work, especially in verses 1 and 3. The poem is really exalted stuff, some of the poet's best so far.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

I'm so happy dear John, because I think this is the best poem I've written so far, and aside of that.. read more
John the Baptist

2 Months Ago

I forgot to ask you about one thing. In the last verse, did you mean "prim" or "prime?" The reason .. read more
Light

2 Months Ago

I meant "prim" as ancient or vintage, but reading Your comment here, I believe the better is to chan.. read more
I really dig the zen vibe here, and the poetic language is very engaging.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for Your kind reading and visit, I'm really glad that You felt a zen vib.. read more
Wow, I am rendered speechless by this work of art. Truly beautiful as is the photograph you chose. Definitely a new favorite of mine.


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Months Ago

my wonderful Traci, how pleased I'm to see You blessing my page again with Your kind beauty, Thank Y.. read more
This poem is absolutely enchanting, well thought out and very well expressed. The picture suits the poem very nicely, and I really enjoy your font choice as well. The poem itself with its rhymes and meaning are very touching. The imagery is exquisite and very well personified as well. All in all, I am also in agreement with the other reviews left here on this poem, and in short... this piece is absolutely beautiful. Well written, well done!

~Carthage Thorne

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

those are wonderfully kind words which I'm humbly and warmly grateful to receive them, my happy plea.. read more
What a glorious wonder and majesty rise in your words. The magnificence of Earth and sky become a music of liquid love, restoring the soul to peace... flowing in a soft silence of joy. Wondrous.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

I dearly love the way You painted my poem through Your beautiful profound words, Your "gem" talent i.. read more
An owl on the moon

4 Months Ago

It is all joy to visit your page, dear Light. :)
Oh how not to need to exist just to be...beautiful- i feel the flowing stream, cascading waterfalls and softness of all things thick thin and transparent with much to aware of in the now- just beautiful to feel what is to be felt not to explain or question be ause it us just as we know to be a part of- touching the heart- oh im so grateful for the blessing of one- wonderful words- much love and blessings🌹

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

Hi my dear Kelly, missed You my wonderful friend, and from You I always expect deep heartfelt and wi.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

4 Months Ago

You ate always in my heart and thoughts and wisdom you have like none- beauty always graces your pag.. read more
Light

4 Months Ago

Awaa thank You my lovely Kelly, been busy of late, have read some of Your new beautiful pieces and s.. read more
I feel a distance between Earth and mysterious space here, an acceptance of difference, a welcome of what can't be seen but gently incredibly experienced within and about. Whether a cerebral flight of infinite fancy or a drifting nothingness along a path of your own finding.. your words thrill yet calm. I feel replete.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

wonderful words and expressions dear Emma, thank You billions for Your own print upon my poem, I dee.. read more
emmajoy

4 Months Ago

Again, my pleasure. There's inevitable calm on your pages. Much needed too. x
Wow! Beautiful and lovely write. Not much else to say. It is beautiful and captivating. Thank you for being you!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

Thank YOU for these warming and heartfelt words my friend, You are truly kind and I'm grateful for Y.. read more
gulp, this is pretty damn pretty! What a delicious moment of clarity in a foggy world

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your lovely compliment, Your kind visit is much appreciated.

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