"Misery"

"Misery"

A Poem by TheMaineRachelle
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How does Misery have been defined?

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I already knew the misery that‘s coming on my line.
Its not about how death is being define.
Its not about how money will make us curse,
But its all about how we are being diversed

I already heard the misery speaking in my head.
Its not about how I see the problems ahead.
Its not about how I see myself lying in the coffin, dead.
But its all about the wrong judgement that has been said.

I already felt the misery staying on my side.
Its not about how the right answers are trying to hide.
Its not about how our love ones are fading slowly,
But its all about how we feel to be alone and lonely.

I‘ll always know, hear and feel the misery living in myself together,
Because I see that the misery is my only companion forever.
Now, do you feel that its coming on your way?
Do you know that its the only thing that would stay everyday?

© 2014 TheMaineRachelle


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TheMaineRachelle
Is my Misery, your misery too?

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Your misery, is my misery too.

You rhyme well, and it had a nice flow.

I also loved the last stanza. Well done. (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice! I like the rhyming and what words you chose to rhyme like slowly and lonely... I never thought of that. I also have to say the way you used the theme was well done too.

Cool read 8.9/10



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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TheMaineRachelle
TheMaineRachelle

Cavite, Bacoor, Philippines



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Hey, I‘m Rachelle and I‘m only a teen-ager, yeah! too young for writing, isn‘t? I like making poems because its the only way where I can show my feelings. I also love rock music and .. more..

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