Human Imprint

So many places, different races

Broken hearts, worried faces

196 nation,

795 million people with no tummies to feed 

A world made up of discrimination, loathe and greed 

What about nature, society, education?

What about our future generations?

I see revolution, but no evolution 

I see violence, poverty, and pollution 

Could humans become extinct? 

Will any of us leave an imprint?

What we need to understand is that we are made up of many bodies, but one soul 

And what happens to one, happens to all 

Be the change you wish to see in the world 

and remember you can change it with only one word 

What if we unite rather than fight?

What if we see each other as humans, not black nor white?

What if all this noise became quiet? 

And we're all standing in the light?

Will our lives be right?

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Hello!
I just love courageous reads like this, and I make it a point to praise them (because for SOME REASON, they usually don't get many comments...which says a lot).
Another powerful and necessary piece going into my fav stash, yep.
Thanks for sharing.

[Rachel Rashid]

Hey I'm pleased because you did, and I don't mind the number of comments, it's enough for me that this message reached one person at least. Your comment meant a lot, thanks

[Antoñyo]

you're welcome

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

O.O well.... this poem is very true to the heart. you have a very strong point. very reflective. very good

[Rachel Rashid]

Your reviews makes me want to keep writing! I really appreciate it

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

I'm glad. I love to motivate writers. Especially one like you

[Kirsty Woodward]

This poem is EVERYTHING. Apologies my comment isn't necessarily a critique.. More a show of love. The world needs to read this.

[Rachel Rashid]

Thanks dear your comment means a lot, and people should feel this more