Pour Le Couer D'Or

A french love poem I wrote.

Pour Le Couer D'Or
(For the Heart of Gold)

Mon coeur s'adoucit sous votre regard
(My heart softens under your gaze)
Ensemble, nous baisserons notre garde
(Together, we will lower our guard)
Et apprenez à aimer être aimés
(and learn to love and to be loved)
parce qu'un amour comme le nôtre
(because a love like ours)
apporte l'espoir à l'âme
(brings hope to the soul)

Author's Note

I am a little unsure about the grammar, it being a different language for me, so if you are a native speaker, please point out errors. Thanks.

Reviews

[Amy L. Arend]

ok, I officially fell in love with this poem. It is truly amazing (both in french and english of course). Thank you for sharing!

[Amy L. Arend]

can you put it into english? :)