Something great has now begun

Something great has now begun

A Poem by Raja Anjana Kothapalli
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A poem on 'Love at first sight.'

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Ending the search of my wandering eyes
Land they did, on you, clear and nice
Image of yours, conquered my mind
Thoughts confirming my heart's find

You sowed the seeds of love
Beneath my dappled sun
I watered it singing-
Something great has now begun

Since then, I see you everywhere
Your illusions have seen my soul bare
Whatever I start, ends with your
thoughts, either early or late hour

Submerging myself in you
Emerged new dreams, in a queue
In my tiny heart, the size of my fist
There raised a shrine of my eyes' cheer mist

It soars up, reaching great heights
of the skies, from my dreamy nights
In it, you reign over my eager heart
Casting my mind as a piece of your art

Your ever bright face
As an idol never replaced
In my heart's shrine
I have it permanently placed

I shall await your affection forever
Like the urge to unite its sea, by a river
Like the thirsty land for first shower
Like the sail for safety light of its tower

Ending the search of my wandering eyes
land they did, on you, clear and nice
Image of yours, conquered my mind
Thoughts confirming my heart's find

You sowed the seeds of love
Beneath my dappled sun
I watered it singing-
Something great has now begun

© Raja Anjana Kothapalli 2014

© 2015 Raja Anjana Kothapalli



Author's Note

Raja Anjana Kothapalli
Thanks for reading.☺

If your time permits, you are always welcome to leave a feedback.

-Anjana

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Anjana: End of 1st stanza at heart's find: So beautiful; ending stanza 4; eyes cheer mist: what wonderful flow; it it lovely and heartwrenching; so well expressed. Every single word is so, so beautiful; never stopping with a perfect theme of love found: The title of Something great has now begun is wonderful. You are a great writer.
You sowed the seeds of love
(Great metaphors and descriptions)
Beneath my dappled sun
I watered it singing-
Something great has now begun
Please keep writing. Thank you. Dale

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the wonderful review!☺



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Anjana: End of 1st stanza at heart's find: So beautiful; ending stanza 4; eyes cheer mist: what wonderful flow; it it lovely and heartwrenching; so well expressed. Every single word is so, so beautiful; never stopping with a perfect theme of love found: The title of Something great has now begun is wonderful. You are a great writer.
You sowed the seeds of love
(Great metaphors and descriptions)
Beneath my dappled sun
I watered it singing-
Something great has now begun
Please keep writing. Thank you. Dale

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the wonderful review!☺
A beautiful piece anjana.. theres so much emotion and very very apt imagery you've associated with ti here. great work :) thoroughly enjoyed reading this fluid work. cheers.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Roshan Nair! :)
Beautiful! Everything interlocking, transcending, a songbird whistling love in every tree branch. Loved this poem Raja!

Regards,
Al

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Al, for your sweet and poetic feedback! ☺
Beautiful write.
An imaginative and creative.
Love it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thank you, SSADD!☺
Wow Anjana!
This was really beautiful and honest.
I loved it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Ishita Dixit!☺
Lovely poem Anjana! Too good!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Deepika!☺
Full of metaphors, similes and wonderful images of first love. Your words perfectly describe the eagerness and anticipation of first love: beautiful!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thank you, F T Ledrew!☺
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2 Years Ago

You are most kindly welcome Anjana!

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Raja Anjana Kothapalli
Raja Anjana Kothapalli

Hyderabad, Telangana, India



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