Fall

The time , u met failures.

Can't look back ,
Don't know what to do.
May I won't win,
May I won't last long,
Sit and Think,
"How could I win?"

Years are now like days,
Days are seconds,
What matters more,
If could give another .
Don't keep regrets in end,
So fight.
On falling in those fears.

Reviews

[Callial]

This is an interesting style and although I can't personally say I enjoy it, as it feels pretty choppy to me, I can see the appeal that some might have. One recommendation I have is to refine the rhythm a bit more and maybe remove some unnecessary words. I do like the idea of the poem and enjoyed the meaning behind it :)