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A Poem by RayXor

clouded dreams i thought I'd seen faded thoughts and memories my world is gone forgotten realm lost to me and never found within myself blank and bare i try to remember but nothing is there no darkness no light no sorrow not now not ever somehow inside my endless void inside my emptiness inside there is nothing nothing inside with nothing coming and no time to care if this nothingness will end

© 2014 RayXor


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Another set of lines that would make a great lyric.

I think you should break it down into lines of poetry, rather than this run sentence

Posted 9 Years Ago


Are you in a band or something? cuz I can easily see this in a song

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RayXor

9 Years Ago

sounds like fun all i ask is to hear it lol
Mohamed Boutaib

9 Years Ago

hahahaha yeah sure man, and the credits of course :D
RayXor

9 Years Ago

i dont even care for credit im a very simple person lol
yep...

damn.. I forget that there has to be 25 characters to post..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RayXor

9 Years Ago

i always just use a bunch of spaces and a period to solve that problem lol

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Added on September 11, 2014
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RayXor
RayXor

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im 27 and have been through alot of crap in the past year so i decided to start writing again lets see where it goes... more..

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A Poem by RayXor