JUST

just a blink in time and a bottle of rum

just one night that just went wrong

just one man lost and gone

just one knife thrust so strong 

just unjust

unfair

so wrong

he lost his life to lovers song 

lost his life for that one 

he gave it up now hes gone

gone forever remembered by some

remembered forever 

but i cant go on

i cant hold strong 

i cant believe hes really gone 

Reviews

[Urja Gokani]

this poem is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Elin Luna]

These words are powerful and true. I love this poem.

[Gamitsuki]

you're a great writer and a person. I can tell.........NiCe....!!!

[MomzillaNC]

The has the feel of lyric.

[RayXor]

thank you!

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

unfair
"so wrong
he lost his life to lovers song
lost his life for that one
he gave it up now hes gone
gone forever remembered by some
remembered forever"

This one sounded like a song. Bravo..........

[RayXor]

thank you this one cut deep to write but sometimes its words we bleed

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)...................