Thinking of You

Morning ascends

And walks through my window

As I awaken

My eyes move aimlessly

Wandering around

Until they meet with yours

United together

By love so intense

And pure adoration

Our lips touch each other

They've been drawn together

By some strong force of passion

Then I leave the room

It doesn't end there

Hours go by

And I don't know why

But I become lost

In a sweet reverie

All day and all night

I'm thinking of you

The light of the sun

Moves away to the west

You give me another of those passionate kisses

While the moon watches us

As the night goes by

I Start to dream

And travel to a place

Where it's just you and I

Standing alone in the moonlight again

All day and all night I'm thinking of you

Yes my love I'm always

Thinking of you

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I'm thinking of you

The light of the sun

Moves away to the west

You give me another of those passionate kisses"

Extremely romantic. Thank you for posting...:)..................

[Shapirta]

wow. great poem! has a deep message. very descriptive and paints a vivid picture in my mind! i can't wait to your other writings in the future! great job! also, can you do me a favor and review 'the silver necklace'? i want to know what others think of it. any constructive criticism is totally open! thanks, and great job again on the poem.

[Bec]

Thank You. Let's just say it somebody I know inspired it.

[Shapirta]

its okay, you didn't even need to tell me, lol=)

[Bec]

Just wanted to put it out there hehe.

[rach]

Such a sweet description of love, I really enjoyed reading this.