Without You

     Everything hurts inside. Without you I feel nothing. When we are together, laughing like we used to, evevrything feels right again. Yet, when she comes around you change your course. I don't know when and I dont know how but one day we will be together again, reunited hand in hand.

     When that day comes it will be happiest day of my life.. but until then i will have to keep living my life without you..

Author's Note

This is my first peice of writing.. read and and tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Fantasia Allmighty]

Yea... same, but girl as your friend i'm here to say HE, depending I know who he is, isn't worth the ground you walk on. He broke your heart and will do it again, but the writing he made you write is wonderful!

[Mithridate]

Good job :) sorry about the sad feelings though :(

[Aggie Skeleton]

Sweetheart, I was there when you felt that. I know your pain.

[Drew]

I liked this and now exactly how you feel.